Re: [bc-gnso] Updated draft for approval on 14-Jan: BC comment on Strawman Solution

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Steve,

Great work, thank you.

Given the sensitivities around the term 'blocking' I've suggested 
amendments to one of the paragraphs, which I hope is helpful.

Kind regards,

Martin

Martin C SUTTON 
Group Risk 
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Group Security & Fraud Risk
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From:
Steve DelBianco <sdelbianco@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
To:
bc - GNSO list <bc-gnso@xxxxxxxxx>
Date:
14/01/2013 02:30
Subject:
[bc-gnso] Updated draft for approval on 14-Jan: BC comment on Strawman 
Solution
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The attached update is for discussion and final approval during our 14-Jan 
member call. 

I've updated the original draft per suggestions from Ron Andruff, John 
Berard, Elisa Cooper, and Sara Deutsch. A redline is also attached to show 
those changes from the 2-Jan draft.

The BC will submit these comments on 15-Jan.  We will also be able to 
submit Reply comments thru 5-Feb.


From: Steve DelBianco <sdelbianco@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: Wednesday, January 2, 2013 5:44 PM
To: bc - GNSO list <bc-gnso@xxxxxxxxx>
Subject: DRAFT for review: BC comment on Strawman Solution

BC members:

In Toronto , the BC/IPC/ISPC requested improved Rights Protection Measures 
(RPMs).  That prompted ICANN executive management to host follow-up 
meetings with multiple stakeholders.   As a result, ICANN posted a 
"strawman solution" for public comment (link).    Public comments are due 
by 16-Jan-2013.

Attached is a draft BC comment on the Strawman solution, based on prior BC 
positions and discussions, email exchanges with BC members, and initial 
review by the ex comm.

Per the BC charter, this draft is posted for 14 days of review and 
comment.  As soon as possible, please REPLY ALL with your suggested edits 
to these comments.   If any BC member objects to the BC filing the 
attached draft comment , please REPLY ALL and indicate your objection and 
reason. 

We plan to finalize and submit these comments on 16-Jan-2013.

--
Steve DelBianco
BC vice chair for policy coordination 
[attachment "BC Comment on Strawman Solution [v2].docx" deleted by Martin 
C SUTTON/HGHQ/HSBC] [attachment "Redline.docx" deleted by Martin C 
SUTTON/HGHQ/HSBC] 



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