Re: [bc-gnso] FOR REVIEW BY 11-AUG: BC comments on Expert Working Group for Directory Services ( new Whois)
<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=iso-8859-1"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">I have added to J Scott's latest redraft a bit at the end about the possibility of extending this work to the cc space.<div><br></div><div>The wording is not perfect IMO, but hopefully the intent is clear.</div><div><br></div><div>Thanks,</div><div><br></div><div></div></body></html> Attachment:
BC Comments - EWG Draft Model [v1] -JSE2-SVG.doc <html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=iso-8859-1"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><div></div><div><br><div> <div style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: medium; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: -webkit-auto; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><div style="font-family: Arial; word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; ">Stéphane Van Gelder<br>Chairman and Managing Director/Fondateur<br>STEPHANE VAN GELDER CONSULTING<br><br></span><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; ">T (FR): +33 (0)6 20 40 55 89</span></div><div style="font-family: Arial; word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; ">T (UK): +44 (0)</span>7583 457053</div><div style="font-family: Arial; word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; ">Skype: SVANGELDER</span></div><div style="font-family: Arial; word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; "><a href="http://www.stephanevangelder.com/"; target="_blank">www.StephaneVanGelder.com</a></span><br style="font-family: Helvetica; "><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; ">----------------<br></span><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; ">Follow us on Twitter: @stephvg and "like" us on </span><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; ">Facebook: </span><a href="http://www.facebook.com/DomainConsultant";>www.facebook.com/DomainConsultant</a><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; "><br></span><div>LinkedIn: <a href="http://fr.linkedin.com/in/domainconsultant/"; title="View public profile" name="webProfileURL">fr.linkedin.com/in/domainconsultant/</a></div></div></div> </div> <br><div><div>Le 5 août 2013 à 18:58, "J. Scott Evans" <<a href="mailto:jscottevans@xxxxxxxxx";>jscottevans@xxxxxxxxx</a>> a écrit :</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><div><div style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-family: garamond, 'new york', times, serif; font-size: 14pt; "><div><span>Bill and team:</span></div><div style="font-size: 19px; font-family: garamond, 'new york', times, serif; background-color: transparent; font-style: normal; "><span><br></span></div><div style="font-size: 19px; font-family: garamond, 'new york', times, serif; background-color: transparent; font-style: normal; "><span>I have re-reviewed the draft with Bill's suggested revisions. I have attached a redline showing my thoughts on top of Bill's suggested edits.</span></div><div style="font-size: 19px; font-family: garamond, 'new york', times, serif; background-color: transparent; font-style: normal; "><span><br></span></div><div style="font-size: 19px; font-family: garamond, 'new york', times, serif; background-color: transparent; font-style: normal; "><span>J. Scott</span></div><div></div><div> </div><div><font style="color: rgb(96, 0, 191); font-weight: bold; font-family: tahoma, times, serif; "><font class="Apple-style-span" size="4" face="garamond, 'new york', times, serif">j. scott evans - head of global brand, domains & copyright - Yahoo! Inc. - 408.349.1385 - <a href="mailto:jscottevans@xxxxxxxxx";>jscottevans@xxxxxxxxx</a></font><br></font><br></div><div id="ynano_hooks_page" style="display:none;"><div id="callsToClient_page" style="display:none;"></div><div id="eventsFromClient_page" style="display:none;"></div></div><div id="ynano_hooks_page" style="display:none;"><div id="callsToClient_page" style="display:none;"></div><div id="eventsFromClient_page" style="display:none;"></div></div><div><br></div> <div style="font-family: garamond, 'new york', times, serif; font-size: 14pt; "> <div style="font-family: 'times new roman', 'new york', times, serif; font-size: 12pt; "> <div dir="ltr"> <hr size="1"> <font size="2" face="Arial"> <b><span style="font-weight:bold;">From:</span></b> "Smith, Bill" <<a href="mailto:bill.smith@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx";>bill.smith@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx</a>><br> <b><span style="font-weight: bold;">To:</span></b> "<a href="mailto:stephvg@xxxxxxxxx";>stephvg@xxxxxxxxx</a>" <<a href="mailto:stephvg@xxxxxxxxx";>stephvg@xxxxxxxxx</a>> <br><b><span style="font-weight: bold;">Cc:</span></b> Steve DelBianco <<a href="mailto:sdelbianco@xxxxxxxxxxxxx";>sdelbianco@xxxxxxxxxxxxx</a>>; "<a href="mailto:bc-gnso@xxxxxxxxx";>bc-gnso@xxxxxxxxx</a> list" <<a href="mailto:bc-gnso@xxxxxxxxx";>bc-gnso@xxxxxxxxx</a>> <br> <b><span style="font-weight: bold;">Sent:</span></b> Monday, August 5, 2013 9:12 AM<br> <b><span style="font-weight: bold;">Subject:</span></b> Re: [bc-gnso] FOR REVIEW BY 11-AUG: BC comments on Expert Working Group for Directory Services ( new Whois)<br> </font> </div> <div class="y_msg_container"><br><div id="yiv8695404229"> <div> <div style="word-wrap:break-word;">+1 <div><br> </div> <div>Attached is a marked up version of the document. I have attempted to replace web and website with Internet and service (generally) and hope that my changes read properly. I believe it important to make the distinction between the web and Internet since the ARDS is used for much more than the web.</div> <div><br> </div> <div>I also included some comments and additions that I believe are necessary to include. In particular, I disagree with the assertion that there is no foundation for the belief that the scale of the ARDS make it vulnerable. Internet entities are vulnerable regardless of size but as they grow, they become increasingly attractive targets. ARDS will be attractive - or the Registrar community has been disingenuous about the scale of SPAM, customer loss, etc. that results from harvesting information via WHOIS.</div> <div><br> </div> <div>I have also added text related to Gated Access and concerns related to data aggregation and operation of such a critical resource necessarily dependent on PII of security professionals. These individuals face very real risks given the work they do, those they "oppose", and the penalties imposed for crimes they uncover.</div> <div><br> </div> <div>I hope we will consider the changes I have proposed.</div> <div> <div><br> </div> <div></div> </div> </div> <div style="word-wrap:break-word;"> <div> <div><br> <div> <div><br> </div> <div>On Aug 3, 2013, at 3:51 PM, <a rel="nofollow" ymailto="mailto:stephvg@xxxxxxxxx"; target="_blank" href="mailto:stephvg@xxxxxxxxx";>stephvg@xxxxxxxxx</a> wrote:</div> <br class="yiv8695404229x_Apple-interchange-newline"> <blockquote type="cite"> <div style="word-wrap:break-word;">Thank you Steve, Laura, Susan, J Scott and Elisa for a well drafted document that I believe is perfectly inline with business users interests as defined by our charter. <div><br> </div> <div>If I might make a suggestion, even though it's out of scope of the EWG's work, I would love to see something in our opening comments about the fact that if the RDS model is adopted (or another unified model for managing gTLD registration data), it would be extremely beneficial for Internet users worldwide if ccTLD registries were also willing to work towards the adoption of the same, single-format, model.</div> <div><br> </div> <div>I think it's useful for commentors to the EWG's draft report to make this point, even though ccTLD managers abide by their own national laws and ways of doing things, because we all have a lot to gain from a more effective and more uniform registration data database.</div> <div><br> </div> <div>Apart from that suggestion, I have no other comments. The draft seems spot on to me and is supported by SVG Consulting Ltd.</div> <div><br> </div> <div>Thanks,</div> <div><br> <div> <div style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: medium; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; word-wrap: break-word; "> <div style="font-family: Arial; word-wrap: break-word; "><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; ">Stéphane Van Gelder<br> Chairman and Managing Director/Fondateur<br> STEPHANE VAN GELDER CONSULTING<br> <br> </span><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; ">T (FR): +33 (0)6 20 40 55 89</span></div> <div style="font-family: Arial; word-wrap: break-word; "><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; ">T (UK): +44 (0)</span>7583 457053</div> <div style="font-family: Arial; word-wrap: break-word; "><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; ">Skype: SVANGELDER</span></div> <div style="font-family: Arial; word-wrap: break-word; "><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; "><a rel="nofollow" target="_blank" href="http://www.stephanevangelder.com/";>www.StephaneVanGelder.com</a></span><br style="font-family: Helvetica; "> <span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; ">----------------<br> </span><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; ">Follow us on Twitter: @stephvg and "like" us on </span><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; ">Facebook: </span><a rel="nofollow" target="_blank" href="http://www.facebook.com/DomainConsultant";>www.facebook.com/DomainConsultant</a><span style="font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif; "><br> </span> <div>LinkedIn: <a rel="nofollow" target="_blank" href="http://fr.linkedin.com/in/domainconsultant/"; title="View public profile" name="x_webProfileURL">fr.linkedin.com/in/domainconsultant/</a></div> </div> </div> </div> <br> <div> <div>Le 3 août 2013 à 17:53, Steve DelBianco <<a rel="nofollow" ymailto="mailto:sdelbianco@xxxxxxxxxxxxx"; target="_blank" href="mailto:sdelbianco@xxxxxxxxxxxxx";>sdelbianco@xxxxxxxxxxxxx</a>> a écrit :</div> <br class="yiv8695404229x_Apple-interchange-newline"> <blockquote type="cite"> <div style="word-wrap: break-word; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; "> <div> <div> <div style="font-size:16px;">It's time for the BC to comment on the<span class="yiv8695404229x_Apple-style-span" style="font-size:medium;"> draft model for Next Generation gTLD Directory Services. </span></div> <div style="font-size:16px;"><span class="yiv8695404229x_Apple-style-span" style="font-size:medium;"><br> </span></div> <div> <div style="font-size:16px;"><span class="yiv8695404229x_Apple-style-span" style="font-size:medium;">The Expert Working Group (EWG) published its draft report <a rel="nofollow" target="_blank" href="https://www.icann.org/en/groups/other/gtld-directory-services/initial-report-24jun13-en.pdf";> here</a>. </span></div> </div> </div> </div> <span id="yiv8695404229x_OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION"> <div> <div style="word-wrap: break-word; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "> <div style=""> <div><span id="yiv8695404229x_OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style="font-size: 16px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "> <div> <div style="word-wrap:break-word;"> <div> <div> <div></div> </div> </div> </div> </div> </span> <div style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; "><span class="yiv8695404229x_Apple-style-span" style="font-size:medium;"><br> </span></div> <div style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; "><span class="yiv8695404229x_Apple-style-span" style="line-height:18px;"><span class="yiv8695404229x_Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium; ">Public comment page is </span><span class="yiv8695404229x_Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Calibri; font-size: medium; "><a rel="nofollow" target="_blank" href="http://www.icann.org/en/news/public-comment/atrt2-02apr13-en.htm";></a><a rel="nofollow" target="_blank" href="http://www.icann.org/en/news/public-comment/thick-whois-initial-21jun13-en.htm";></a><a rel="nofollow" target="_blank" href="http://www.icann.org/en/groups/other/gtld-directory-services/share-24jun13-en.htm";>here</a> and the EWG Wiki page is <a rel="nofollow" target="_blank" href="https://community.icann.org/display/WG/Explore+the+Draft+Next+Generation+gTLD+Directory+Services+Model";> here</a>.</span></span></div> </div> <div style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; "><span class="yiv8695404229x_Apple-style-span" style="line-height:18px;"><br> </span></div> </div> <div style="font-size:16px;"> <div><span class="yiv8695404229x_Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Laura Covington prepared the attached draft of BC comments, with help from Susan Kawaguchi, J Scott Evans, and Elisa Cooper.</span></div> </div> <div style="font-size:16px;"><br> </div> <span id="yiv8695404229x_OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style="font-size: 16px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "> <div> <div style="word-wrap:break-word;"><span id="yiv8695404229x_OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style="font-size:16px;"> <div> <div style="word-wrap:break-word;"> <div> <div> <div> <div> <div class="yiv8695404229x_MsoNormal" style="margin-top:0in;margin-right:0in;margin-left:0in;margin-bottom:0.0001pt;"> <font class="yiv8695404229x_Apple-style-span"></font></div> <font class="yiv8695404229x_Apple-style-span"> <div style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; ">The comment period closes 12-Aug-2013, so please <b>Reply All</b> before 11-Aug with edits or questions. </div> </font></div> </div> </div> </div> </div> </div> </span></div> </div> </span> <div style="font-size:16px;"><br> </div> <span id="yiv8695404229x_OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style="font-size: 16px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "> <div> <div style="word-wrap:break-word;"><span id="yiv8695404229x_OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style="font-size: 16px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "> <div> <div style="word-wrap:break-word;font-size:16px;"> <div> <div> <div> <div style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; font-size: medium; "> <div>--</div> <span class="yiv8695404229x_Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Steve DelBianco</span><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span id="yiv8695404229x_OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION"> <div> <div style="word-wrap:break-word;font-size:16px;"><span id="yiv8695404229x_OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION" style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "> <div> <div style="font-size: 16px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; word-wrap: break-word; "> <div>Vice chair for policy coordination</div> <div>Business Constituency</div> </div> </div> </span></div> </div> </span></span> <div><br class="yiv8695404229x_webkit-block-placeholder"> </div> </div> <blockquote type="cite" style="margin-left:30pt;margin-top:5pt;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:5pt;border-color:initial;font-size:medium;"> <div style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "> <div style="margin:0in 0in 0.0001pt;font-size:12pt;"><br> </div> </div> </blockquote> </div> </div> </div> </div> </div> </span></div> </div> </span></div> </div> </span></div> <span><BC Comments - EWG Draft Model [v1].doc></span></blockquote> </div> <br> </div> </div> </blockquote> </div> <br> </div> </div> </div> </div> </div><br><br></div> </div> </div> </div></div><span><BC Comments - EWG Draft Model [v1] -JSE2.doc></span></blockquote></div><br></div></body></html>
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