Error in website redirection provisions

[Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx>]

I am writing as the former Chair of the PEDNR Workgroup and a member 
of the PEDNR Implementation Review Team.
There is an error in the proposed policy that explicitly contravenes 
one of the PDP Recommendations and was apparently introduced 
accidentally following the last version reviewed by the 
Implementation Review Team.
Paragraph 2.2.3 currently reads:

For registrations deleted eight or more days after expiration: For 
the last eight consecutive days (after expiration) that the 
registration is renewable by the RAE, the existing DNS resolution 
path specified by the RAE must be interrupted by the registrar to the 
extent that the applicable registry permits such interruptions.
"For the last eight consecutive days" should read "For at least the 
last eight consecutive days..." or "For no less than the last eight 
consecutive days...".  This is in line with the PDP Recommendation 2 
which in part reads "...at least 8 consecutive days...".

Associated with this, I would recommend a change to the Notes section 
on Post-Expiration Renewal now reading:
To be clear, this requirement applies at any time during which the 
registration is renewable by the RAE, not just during the 
eight-consecutive-day period described in paragraphs 2.2.2 and 2.2.3.
Since according to paragraphs 2.2.2 and 2.2.3, the actual period may 
be less than or more than eight days, I would suggest replacing 
"eight-consecutive-day" with "entire".
Alan Greenberg