Re: [gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg] Draft initial report
Dear All,<div><br /></div><div>I have made some "minor" changes, based on the initial IPC comments (see enclosed).</div><div><br /></div><div>Best,</div><div>Petter<br /><br />-- <br />Petter Rindforth, LL M <br /> <br />Fenix Legal KB <br />Stureplan 4c, 4tr <br />114 35 Stockholm <br />Sweden <br />Fax: +46(0)8-4631010 <br />Direct phone: +46(0)702-369360 <br />E-mail: petter.rindforth@xxxxxxxxxxxxx <br />www.fenixlegal.eu <br /> <br /> <br />NOTICE <br />This e-mail message is intended solely for the individual or individuals to whom it is addressed. It may contain confidential attorney-client privileged information and attorney work product. If the reader of this message is not the intended recipient, you are requested not to read, copy or distribute it or any of the information it contains. Please delete it immediately and notify us by return e-mail. <br />Fenix Legal KB, Sweden, www.fenixlegal.eu <br />Thank you<br /><br /><p>12 september 2014, Dillon, Chris <c.dillon@xxxxxxxxx> skrev:</p><blockquote type="cite"><div class="oneComWebmail-html oneComWebmail-mail"> <style> .oneComWebmail-html a:link, .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-MsoHyperlink {color: blue; text-decoration: underline;} .oneComWebmail-html a:visited, .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-MsoHyperlinkFollowed {color: purple; text-decoration: underline;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-PlainTextChar {} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-TextebrutCar {} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle22 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle23 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle24 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle25 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle26 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle27 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle28 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle29 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle30 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle31 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle32 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle33 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle34 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle35 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle36 {color: windowtext;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle37 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle38 {color: windowtext;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle39 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle40 {color: windowtext;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle41 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle42 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle43 {color: windowtext;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle44 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle45 {color: windowtext;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle46 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle47 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle48 {color: windowtext;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle49 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle50 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle51 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle52 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle53 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle54 {color: windowtext;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle55 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle56 {color: windowtext;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle57 {color: #1F497D;} .oneComWebmail-html span.oneComWebmail-EmailStyle58 {color: windowtext;} .oneComWebmail-html .oneComWebmail-MsoChpDefault {font-size: 10.0pt;} .oneComWebmail-html @page WordSection1 {size: 612.0pt 792.0pt; margin: 70.85pt 70.85pt 70.85pt 70.85pt;} .oneComWebmail-html div.oneComWebmail-WordSection1 {} </style> <div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple" class="oneComWebmail-body"> <div class="oneComWebmail-WordSection1"> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="">Dear colleagues,</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style=""> </span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="">Just to confirm that it was decided to start work on turning the straw man (latest version attached) into a draft initial report, the first version of which, it is hoped, will be presented during our call on 25 Sept.</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style=""> </span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="">In the meantime, please submit any suggestions or corrections to the list. Speaking of corrections, note that there is rather a confusing typo in paragraph 1 of Appendix B: <i>registrar</i> should read <i>registrant</i>.</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style=""> </span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="">Regards,</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style=""> </span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="">Chris.</span></p> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="">--</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="">Research Associate in Linguistic Computing, Centre for Digital Humanities, UCL, Gower St, London WC1E 6BT Tel +44 20 7679 1599 (int 31599) <a href="http://www.ucl.ac.uk/dis/people/chrisdillon" target="_blank"><span style="color: #0563C1;">www.ucl.ac.uk/dis/people/chrisdillon</span></a> </span></p> </div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style=""> </span></p> <div> <div style="border: none; border-top: solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt; padding: 3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm;"> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">From:</span></b><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> owner-gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg@xxxxxxxxx] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Nathalie Peregrine<br /> <b>Sent:</b> 11 September 2014 21:44<br /> <b>To:</b> gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg@xxxxxxxxx<br /> <b>Cc:</b> gnso-secs@xxxxxxxxx<br /> <b>Subject:</b> [gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg] MP3 Translation and Transliteration of Contact Information PDP WG meeting - 11 September 2014</span></p> </div> </div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"> </p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: black;">Dear All,</span></p> <div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"><br /> Please find the MP3 recording for the Translation and Transliteration of Contact Information PDP Working Group call held on Thursday 11 September at 1300 UTC at:<span style="color: #1F497D;"><br /> </span><a href="http://audio.icann.org/gnso/gnso-transliteration-contact-20140911-en.mp3" target="_blank">http://audio.icann.org/gnso/gnso-transliteration-contact-20140911-en.mp3</a><span style="color: #1F497D;"></span></span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> </span></p> </div> </div> <div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: black;">On page: </span></p> </div> </div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: 12.0pt;"><a href="http://gnso.icann.org/en/group-activities/calendar#sep" target="_blank"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">http://gnso.icann.org/en/group-activities/calendar#</span>sep</a><span style="color: #1F497D;"></span></p> </div> <div> <div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: black;">The recordings and transcriptions of the calls are posted on the GNSO</span></p> </div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: black;">Master Calendar page:</span></p> </div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><a href="http://gnso.icann.org/calendar/" target="_blank"><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: windowtext;">http://gnso.icann.org/calendar/</span></a><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt;"></span></p> </div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> </span></p> </div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><u><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Attendees:</span></u></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Chris Dillon – NCSG</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Ubolthip Sethakaset – Individual</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Peter Dernbach- IPC</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: #333333; background: white;">Pitinan Kooarmornpatana-GAC</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Peter Green (</span><span style="font-size: 10.0pt; background: white;">Zhang Zuan)</span><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">-NCUC</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Justine Chew-<span style="background: white;"> Individual</span></span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Rudi Vansnick – NPOC </span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Lindsay Hamilton Reid – RrSG</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Jennifer Chung – RySG</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Wen Zhai - NTAG</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: #1F497D;"> </span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><u><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Apologies: <span style="color: #1F497D;"></span></span></u></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Petter Rindforth – IPC</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Jim Galvin – SSAC</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Emily Taylor - RrSG</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> </span></p> </div> </div> </div> <div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><u><span style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: black;">ICANN staff:</span></u></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt; background: white;">Julie Hedlund </span><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"></span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Lars Hoffmann</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Amy Bivins</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Glen de Saint Gery</span></p> </div> </div> <div> <div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Nathalie Peregrine</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: black;"> </span></p> </div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: black;">** Please let me know if your name has been le</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: black;">ft off the list **</span></p> </div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: #1F497D;"> </span></p> </div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: black;"> Wiki page:</span><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: #1F497D;"> </span><a href="http://tinyurl.com/mpwxstx" target="_blank"><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt;">http://tinyurl.com/mpwxstx</span></a><b><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> </span></b><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: #1F497D;"></span></p> </div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: black;"> </span></p> </div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: black;">Thank you.</span></p> </div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: black;">Kind regards,</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: #1F497D;"> </span></p> </div> </div> </div> <div> <div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Nathalie</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt; color: black;">GNSO Secretariat </span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><span lang="FR" style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> </span></p> </div> <div> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><u><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;">Adobe Chat Transcript for <b>Thursday 11 September 2014:</b></span></u></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Nathalie Peregrine:Dear all, welcome to the Translation and Transliteration of Contact Information PDP Working group call on the 11th September 2014</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Jennifer Chung:Hello Nathalie and Julie!</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Nathalie Peregrine:Hello Jennifer!</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Jennifer Chung:It looks a bit thin on the numbers right now?</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Chris Dillon:Hello all</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Jennifer Chung:Hello Chris</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Rudi Vansnick:hello everyone </span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Julie Hedlund:@Chris: I've made you a host so you can move the document on the screen.</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Chris Dillon:Thanks</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Peter Dernbach:Hell all.</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Peter Dernbach:Hello all.</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Wen Zhai:Good evening~</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Chris Dillon:Good afternoon!</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Wen Zhai::)</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Nathalie Peregrine:noted! for Emily Taylor</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Justine Chew:@Chris: Yes, happy with your suggestion</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Lindsay Hamilton-Reid:Apologies for being late.</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Rudi Vansnick:are there any suggestions to add to the present document ?</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Peter Dernbach:In Appendix B you refer to "registrars" but I think you mean "registrants".</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Peter Dernbach:"easier to contact registrars"</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Rudi Vansnick:yes should be registrants in fact</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Rudi Vansnick:end of paragraph 1</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Peter Dernbach:and end of paragraph 2</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Rudi Vansnick:could be both also !</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Justine Chew:yes could be both</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Justine Chew:@Rudi: +1</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Justine Chew:Since we are making recommendations, perhaps mention it and qualify if it is not within the WG scope?</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Rudi Vansnick:thank you all</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Jennifer Chung:Thank you Chris, thanks all.</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Pitinan Kooarmornpatana:thanks all</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Julie Hedlund:Thank you everyone!</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Chris Dillon:Thank you.</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoPlainText"><span style="font-size: 11.0pt;"> Chris Dillon:We have some busy weeks coming up!</span></p> <p class="oneComWebmail-MsoNormal"><b><u><span style="font-size: 11.0pt; 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