RE: [gnso-dt-wg] Domain Tasting Outcomes Report version 1.6 part 1
All, The attached pdf file contains my suggested revisions, all of which are quite minor. (Seemed easier than submitting the entire document). Some comments: 1. The annexes should probably be-ordered to correspond to text. I haven't made changes in the text or in the Annex headings because I didn't want to wreck any cross-referencing. If we're going to do so, three Annexes need to change: IPC - now Annex 5, but should be Annex 3 ccTLDs - now Annex 3, but should be Annex 4 UDRP - now Annex 4, but should be Annex 5 2. My comment w/r/t 1.3 is to keep the heading with the text, which may not require revision depending on other changes. 3. I was not clear as to what "potentially modified" referred to in 1.4 so made my best guess, which may not be correct. 4. Sally Foreman, the source of the quote in the IPC RFI summary, asked that she be permitted to amend her comment slightly for clarity. That seemed to be a reasonable request in exchange for agreeing to be identified so I've made the slight amendments. 5. While I believe the current version of section 4.4 is greatly improved from its original form, I still have transparency- and perception-related concerns. Given our timing, I did not see the point in suggesting further revisions. Kristina -----Original Message----- From: owner-gnso-dt-wg@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-dt-wg@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Olof Nordling Sent: Wednesday, October 03, 2007 6:08 PM To: gnso-dt-wg@xxxxxxxxx Subject: [gnso-dt-wg] Domain Tasting Outcomes Report version 1.6 part 1 Dear all, Attached please find part 1 of the next-to-final version of our report, revised in line with the conference call a few hours ago (yes, it took a bit longer to carry out than I had hoped...). Do note that since the text is chopped in two pieces (due to bulkiness), the internal links do not function properly. In the complete version, they do, trust me. Part 2 will follow very shortly. Please note that Mike needs your comments on this no later than 2 PM (PDT) Thursday 4 October! Best regards Olof Attachment:
KR revisions to GNSO DT version 1.6.PDF
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