[gnso-idn-dg] Updated version - resend
I made a few other edits as I was cleaning it up. I believe that all of these are in the spirit of our discussions and mostly involve sentence structure or the wrkind fo things i was wordsmithing on the fly during the meeting.
I did add a sentence requesting a reply from the Boad since we know that this is not automatic, or at leas it hasn't alwasy ben in the past. The requst section is largely rewirtten based on our conversation.
As tina said during the meeting, if there are no substantive issues found in this draft I will forward the draft to the council in 24 hours. If there are substantive issues, I wlil put out a corrected version and wait until that corrected version has had 24 for further comment until forwarding it. and if we find new issues that can't be resolved on the email list, we will need to schedule another call.
thanks for the comments and assistance.