Re: [gnso-improvem-impl-sc] REMINDER FOR REVIEW: Revised SCI Charter 04 June 2013

["Mike O'Connor" <mike@xxxxxxxxxx>]

ah.  good one.

i was thinking along the lines of "the last review by that chain of working 
groups that created and implemented the reforms."  so a clearer wording might 
be something like

        "is responsible for the final review and assessment by the {what ever 
that group of teams is called in aggregate}"

certainly don't want to imply final EVER, just final before transitioning to 
"normal" GNSO process.

thanks,

mikey

On Jun 10, 2013, at 1:31 PM, Avri Doria <avri@xxxxxxx> wrote:

> 
> Hi,
> 
> I am fine with this.
> 
> one questions
> 
>> is responsible for the final review and assessment of
> 
> why final?
> 
> 
> avri
> 
> On 10 Jun 2013, at 10:32, Mike O'Connor wrote:
> 
>> hi all,
>> 
>> i've developed an alternate version of the draft that captures my 
>> understanding of the "narrow, time-limited" definition of the SCI.  i'm 
>> putting it out here for discussion, partly to see if my understanding is 
>> correct and partly as an alternative for the group to consider.
>> 
>> with the exception of one nit-pick in the "Working Method" section, all of 
>> my changes are in the "General" section.  Much of what i've done involved 
>> deleting prior changes -- so you may find it helpful to have Julie's draft 
>> and this one open side by side as you review it.  i decided to treat this as 
>> a "fork" in the drafts rather than trying to pile my changes on top of the 
>> ones that were already there -- it started to get VERY busy.  if people 
>> would prefer, i'm happy to do a draft that makes the changes "on top" of the 
>> ones that Avri and J Scott had already made.
>> 
>> thanks,
>> 
>> mikey
>> 
>> 
>> <SCI Charter Revisions - narrow.doc>
>> 
>> 
>> On Jun 10, 2013, at 6:39 AM, Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>> 
>>> Dear SCI members,
>>> 
>>> Per Ron's request to send this around again, attached is the SCI Charter as 
>>> revised during the SCI meeting on 04 June 2013.  The changes from that 
>>> meeting were grammatical corrections in the General and Working Method 
>>> sections.  The other changes that are redlined and the comments are those 
>>> proposed by the SCI Charter Drafting Team, and the inclusion of the Chair 
>>> and Vice Chair election process as previous discussed and agreed to by the 
>>> SCI.
>>> 
>>> Please send any comments to the list and this item will be on the agenda 
>>> for the next SCI meeting that is scheduled for 02 July 2013.
>>> 
>>> Best regards,
>>> 
>>> Julie
>>> 
>>> Julie Hedlund, Policy Director
>>> <SCI Charter Revisions - 130604.docx>
>> 
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