Re: [gnso-irtp-b-jun09] For FINAL review - IRTP Part B Final Report - deadline 29 May 2011
<html><head><base href="x-msg://172/"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">hi all,<div><br></div><div>i've attached a copy of the draft with a few changes. i started with a clean draft so's to highlight the little nits i picked out.</div><div><br></div><div>there's only one substantive change. i made the following change in the three places that this sentence appeared…</div><div><br></div><div>old:</div><div><br></div><div>"A TEAC must be requested by the registrant in a timely manner, within a reasonable period of time following the unauthorized loss of a domain"</div><div><br></div><div>new:</div><div><br></div><div>"A TEAC must be requested in a timely manner, within a reasonable period of time following the unauthorized loss of a domain"</div><div><br></div><div>so i'm striking the words "by the registrant" -- the reason i'm suggesting this is that the TEAC cannot be requested by the registrant, only the registrar.</div><div><br></div><div>all the rest of the changes are mostly just nits or formatting. i also highlight one section that should be reviewed once Simonetta and James finish up on their language.</div><div><br></div><div>thanks,</div><div><br></div><div>mikey</div><div><br></div><div></div></body></html> Attachment:
IRTP Part B Final Report - 25 May 2011-- Mikey edits.doc <html><head><base href="x-msg://172/"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><div></div><div><br><div><div>On May 25, 2011, at 4:45 AM, Marika Konings wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><div>Dear All,</div><div><br></div><div>You'll find posted on the wiki (<a href="https://community.icann.org/display/gnsoirtpb/For+Review+by+29+May+2011";>https://community.icann.org/display/gnsoirtpb/For+Review+by+29+May+2011</a>) the latest version of the Final Report. This version includes the changes discussed on our call yesterday (including amongst others: changing Emergency Action Channel to Transfer Emergency Action Contact; updated notes to reflect WG discussion and conclusion on 60-day lock recommendation; updated TEAC FAQ).</div><div><br></div><div>This version does not include updated language to reflect that the 60-day lock should be considered as part of the Issue Report on 'change of control' (recommendation #4) as discussed yesterday, which will be circulated later today on the mailing list for your review and comment by James / Simonetta. In addition, it does not include any language Barbara may submit to convey that in the case of a transfer undo registries will update the registrar of record to its previous state.</div><div><br></div><div>Apart from the updated recommendation in relation to the 60-day lock which you will have the opportunity to review separately, the report notes that <span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Calibri; line-height: 22px; ">all the recommendations listed currently in the report have the full consensus support from the Working Group.</span></div><div><br></div><div>Please review the latest version of the Final Report.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><b><u>You are encouraged to share any comments/edits/suggestions you may have as soon as possible but no later than<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></u><ins>COB 29 May 2011</ins></b>. The objective is to submit this report to the GNSO Council and for publication on Monday 30 May 2011.</div><div><br></div><div>With best regards,</div><div><br></div><div>Marika</div></div></blockquote></div><br><div> <span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: separate; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: auto; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 0px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; font-size: medium; "><div><div style="font-size: 12px; ">- - - - - - - - -</div><div style="font-size: 12px; ">phone <span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space: pre; "> </span>651-647-6109 </div><div style="font-size: 12px; ">fax <span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space: pre; "> </span>866-280-2356 </div><div style="font-size: 12px; ">web <span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space: pre; "> </span><a href="http://www.haven2.com";>http://www.haven2.com</a></div><div style="font-size: 12px; ">handle<span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space: pre; "> </span>OConnorStP (ID for public places like Twitter, Facebook, Google, etc.)</div></div></span> </div> <br></div></body></html>
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