Re: [gnso-osc-csg] Re: Conference call tomorrow Updated document
Hi all, Please find my attached edits. I have tried to address some of the issues raised by Chuck and Krista in those edits. I found all their comments relevant and well measured. I unfortunately cannot attend the call today, but hope these edits are of some usefulness to the team. Best Regards, Michael Young On 10-08-26 4:02 PM, "Julie Hedlund" <julie.hedlund@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Dear Olga and Work Team members, > > Here is the document that combines the edits and comments from Krista Papac > and Chuck Gomes for our discussion tomorrow at our usual time of 1300 UTC. > The edits and comments are shown as tracked changes to the version of the > document that I sent for review on Monday. Please let me know if you have any > changes. Thank you. > > Best regards, > > Julie > > > On 8/26/10 2:45 PM, "Olga Cavalli" <olgacavalli@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > >> Thanks Julie! >> Regards >> Olga >> >> 2010/8/26 Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@xxxxxxxxx> >>> Thank you Olga. I had given Work Team members until 1900 UTC today to send >>> comments. When the deadline is passed I will produce a document that >>> includes both Krista and Chuck¹s edits and comments. >>> >>> Best regards, >>> >>> Julie >>> >>> >>> >>> On 8/26/10 2:36 PM, "Olga Cavalli" <olgacavalli@xxxxxxxxx >>> <http://olgacavalli@xxxxxxxxx> > wrote: >>> >>>> Hi, >>>> After reviewing comments sent by Krista, Chuck and Claudio my proposal for >>>> tomorrow´s call is the following: >>>> >>>> 1. Review and edit the draft document in the light of Chuck´s and Krista´s >>>> comments. >>>> 2. Try to reach a new version of the document agreed by those present in >>>> the call. >>>> 3. Send a new document for full team review. >>>> 4. Exchange some ideas about Claudio´s comments which are not edits to the >>>> document but very relevant in relation with the mission of the committee >>>> and its purpose. >>>> >>>> Comments are welcome. >>>> Best regards >>>> Olga >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> 2010/8/23 Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@xxxxxxxxx >>>> <http://julie.hedlund@xxxxxxxxx> > >>>>> Dear Work Team members, >>>>> >>>>> At our sub-team meeting last Friday, the Work Team asked me to edit the >>>>> latest version of the draft Task 2 working document to clean it up and >>>>> prepare it for review by the full Work Team. >>>>> >>>>> Your action is requested: The attached draft Task 2 Working Document is >>>>> ready for your review. Please send comments to the list or, if you have >>>>> specific edits, please include them as tracked edits and send them to me >>>>> no later than 1900 UTC/1200 PDT/1500 EDT on Thursday, 26 August, so that >>>>> I may incorporate them into a revised document for discussion at our >>>>> regular meeting on Friday, 27 August at 1300 UTC. >>>>> >>>>> Please note: The document is now being discussed at the full Work Team >>>>> level so we urge you to comment on the document and to attend Friday¹s >>>>> meeting. The document also has been posted to the wiki page at: >>>>> https://st.icann.org/icann-osc/index.cgi?constituency_operations_team. >>>>> >>>>> Thank you and please let me know if you have any questions. >>>>> >>>>> Best regards, >>>>> >>>>> Julie >>>> >>>> >> >> > Attachment:
OSC COT Task 2 Working Document 23 Aug 2010-KP-CG-MY-Edits.doc
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