Re: [gnso-policyimpl-wg] Redlined GAC Letter

[Nic Steinbach <nic@xxxxxxxx>]

Hi Guys,

I think it looks good. My only criticism would be the following sentence:

"As part of the effort, the WG wants to reach out at the beginning of our
efforts to the GAC to gain input to assist us in our efforts."

Maybe rework with a bit less "effort". Something like:

"From the onset of this process, the WG would like to gain input from the
GAC to assist us in our efforts."

-Nic



On Wed, Oct 16, 2013 at 12:17 PM, Olga Cavalli <olgacavalli@xxxxxxxxx>wrote:

> Hi Chuck,
> I think the letter is very good.
> Please note that I will participate in the call but I may have some
> connectiviy problems due to the location where I will be getting online.
>  best regards
> Olga
>
>
> 2013/10/16 Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
>
>   One of our agenda items for our meeting today is to discuss a letter to
>> the GAC.  Note that we sent letters to the other ACs and the SOs but we did
>> not yet send a letter to the GAC because we thought it best to customize
>> the GAC letter somewhat.  Marika and I made some edits to the letter we
>> sent to the other groups to create the attached letter; our edits are
>> redlined.
>>
>>
>>
>> Please review it before today’s call if possible so we can hopefully
>> decide whether or not to send it.  Additional edits are welcome.
>>
>>
>>
>> Chuck
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Nic Steinbach