Re: [gnso-ppsc-pdp] RE: For Final Review - Updated Final Report
In the intro to section 2, you ended up with "GNSO Council decided referred the comments....". The extraneous "decided" should be deleted. The other changes look fine. My contribution and other comments sent out an hour ago. Alan At 25/09/2011 09:17 PM, Neuman, Jeff wrote: All, Please find enclosed some comments on the Final Report. Alan ? I believe we are still waiting for language from you on Page 36. Thanks! Jeffrey J. Neuman Neustar, Inc. / Vice President, Law & PolicyThe information contained in this e-mail message is intended only for the use of the recipient(s) named above and may contain confidential and/or privileged information. If you are not the intended recipient you have received this e-mail message in error and any review, dissemination, distribution, or copying of this message is strictly prohibited. If you have received this communication in error, please notify us immediately and delete the original message.From: owner-gnso-ppsc-pdp@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-ppsc-pdp@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Marika KoningsSent: Thursday, September 22, 2011 11:52 AM To: Gnso-ppsc-pdp@xxxxxxxxx Subject: [gnso-ppsc-pdp] For Final Review - Updated Final Report Dear All,Following today's call, please find attached an updated version of the Updated Final Report posted on the wiki for your review (see <https://community.icann.org/display/gnsoppsc/2.+PDP-WT+Documents+%28Drafts+-+Published%29>https://community.icann.org/display/gnsoppsc/2.+PDP-WT+Documents+%28Drafts+-+Published%29). Note, Alan will be circulating proposed language in relation to consideration of the Final Report (see page 30 of the Word document) later today.Please provide your comments, edits, suggestions and/or questions on the Updated Final Report and/or public comment review tool at the latest by Sunday 25 September.With best regards, Marika
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