[gnso-ppsc-wg] AD's homework, was Re: [] JSE's homework

[Avri Doria <avri@xxxxxxx>]

Hi,

What an example you set by doing your homework early.  

In any case I have edited the doc you provided and think I covered my 
assignments.  Not sure if I was just supposed to edit the comments or actually 
take a stab at new text.  I did both.

Issue 1 - section 2.2. page 14-15

Issue 3 - section 3.6, added a version of the text I used in the JAS Final 
report, also added some additional content on recommend methods for finding the 
correct designation.  Not sure some of what I wrote may not be controversial, 
so please be sure to read carefully.  Also added some words on the issue of 
someone hiding their identity when they are the force behind a minority opinion.

I think this is what I agreed to work on, though I am have some fuzzy memory of 
being asked to do something else and not sure what it might be or whether i 
agreed or not (or whether i was fuzzy and evasive in my answer).

cheers,

a.

Attachment: GNSO_WG_Guidelines_with_Comments_[JSE+ad]Oct2010.doc
Description: MS-Word document

On 9 Oct 2010, at 13:56, J. Scott Evans wrote:

> Dear All:
> 
> Pursuant to the agreement on our call last Wednesday, I have attached a 
> redlined version of the Working Group Guidelines draft with my suggested 
> language for responding to the PPSC list of issues.
> 
> Specifically, I have prepared either responses to or revisional text for the 
> following:
> 
> 1.  Issue two on Liason neutrality (Section 6.1.4);
> 
> 2.  Issue 3.2 regarding the ability of an individual to challenge a consensus 
> determination under Section 3.
> 
> 4.  Issue 4, regarding revising the language to ensure that major decisions 
> are made on the mailing list so as to avoid leaving out those who do not make 
> calls are speak English.
> 
> 5.  Issue 5 identifiying concerns on 3.1, 3.2, 4.4 and 2.1.2 submitted by the 
> IPC.
> 
> Please look these over and let the list know your thoughts. 
> 
> Avri, if you have not yet crafted your proposed language, I would ask that 
> you merely add your homework to the attached document to avoid version 
> confusion.
> 
> Speak with you all next Wednesday and, hopefully, I will read some indepth 
> discussion on these points over the next day or so.
> 
> In the meantime, I hope everyone is having a wonderful weekend.
> 
> Here's to chamagne days and caviar nights.
> 
> Ciao.
> 
> J. Scott
> 
> j. scott evans - senior legal director, global brand and trademarks - Yahoo! 
> Inc. - 408.349.1385 - jscottevans@xxxxxxxxx
> 
> 
> <GNSO_WG_Guidelines_with_Comments_[JSE]Oct2010.doc>