RE: [gnso-rap-dt] RAPWG Final Report - Adjustment Recommendation

[berrycobb@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx]

Greg,

I'm satisfied with your version.  Thank you sir!


Berry Cobb
Infinity Portals LLC
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http://www.infinityportals.com
866.921.8891

-----Original Message-----
From: Greg Aaron [mailto:gaaron@xxxxxxxxxxxx]
Sent: Monday, May 24, 2010 10:50 AM
To: berrycobb@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx; gnso-rap-dt@xxxxxxxxx
Subject: RE: [gnso-rap-dt] RAPWG Final Report - Adjustment Recommendation

Change ~ Page 4/5, and Change ~ Page 21

INITIAL REPORT VERSION:
"In discussing registration abuse versus domain name use abuse, the RAPWG
noted that registration abuses may occur at various points in a domain
name's lifecycle. The RAPWG therefore found that making distinctions between
pre-domain-creation, domain-creation, and post-creation abuses is sometimes
not applicable or useful when considering whether an abuse is in-scope for
policy-making."

BERRY's REVISION:
"The RAPWG attempted to make distinctions of abuse within the lifecycle such
as pre-domain-creation, domain-creation, and post-creation.  However, this
exercise was not useful in determining policy scope, and as such, the RAPWG
only made the distinction between Registration and Use."

GREG's REVISION OF BERRY'S VERSION:
"The RAPWG attempted to understand abuses by categorizing them based on
domain life cycle -- such as pre-domain-creation, domain-creation, and
post-domain-creation abuses.  However, the RAPWG noted that abuses may occur
at various points in a domain name's lifecycle, and that life cycle
categorizations are not always applicable or useful when considering whether
a given abuse is in-scope for policy-making.  The RAPWG found that in order
to determine whether an abuse is in policy-making scope, it is important to
identify and understand the registration and use issues involved."


Does that work?

All best,
--Greg



-----Original Message-----
From: berrycobb@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:berrycobb@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx]
Sent: Monday, May 24, 2010 11:32 AM
To: gnso-rap-dt@xxxxxxxxx
Subject: [gnso-rap-dt] RAPWG Final Report - Adjustment Recommendation



RAPWG,

Per our call today, IMO the current text within the Executive Summary
(page 4/5) & Body Content (page 21) is confusing.  I recommend the
following change to better represent what the WG completed in our
abuse analysis.

Current Text:
In discussing registration abuse versus domain name use abuse, the
RAPWG noted that registration abuses may occur at various points in a
domain name?s lifecycle. The RAPWG therefore found that making
distinctions between pre-domain-creation, domain-creation, and
post-creation abuses is sometimes not applicable or useful when
considering whether an abuse is in-scope for policy-making.

Proposed Text:
In discussing registration abuse versus domain name use abuse, the
RAPWG noted that registration abuses may occur at various points in a
domain name?s lifecycle.  The RAPWG attempted to make distinctions of
abuse within the lifecycle such as pre-domain-creation,
domain-creation, and post-creation.  However, this exercise was not
useful in determining policy scope, and as such, the RAPWG only made
the distinction between Registration and Use.

Change @ Page 4/5
Change @ Page 21



Berry Cobb
Infinity Portals LLC
berrycobb@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
http://www.infinityportals.com
866.921.8891