[gnso-sg1-vi-feb10] here's my pass through the matrix
big day! Dad's moved, and i made it through the matrix. not too bad... i've attached my draft -- the tab "Mikey's recrunch" is the place to look. i left the original stuff in, but built another column with my redraft right beside it and tried to self-audit to make sure i didn't miss anything. you can see that i kinda ran out of creative steam towards the end. :-) my goal was to reframe the items in a general enough way that some of the repetition was compressed out. i also wanted to turn them all into questions. i stole Sebastien's idea of numbering the [n] items, and i wanted to get people thinking about the upper and lower bounds of acceptability. i didn't quite get to framing the answers, although you can see an example in cell E58. but my sweetie is demanding food and we're headed out to a new Caribbean place just down the road. so i'll crunch those in during the next pass. i'm interested in ideas, edits, critique, etc. onward, mikey Attachment:
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