RE: [soac-newgtldapsup-wg] Revison 2.15

["Tijani BEN JEMAA" <tijani.benjemaa@xxxxxxxx>]

Hi Avri,

 

Attached is the last version you sent with my comments/corrections.

 

I put:

*         in red things to be removed 

*         In blue things to be added.

*         In green my comments

 

As a general remark, the level of consensus should be highlighted, and put
either at the very beginning of the paragraph or at its end for uniformity

 

If you don’t understand the raison of the proposed correction, or if you
don’t agree on something, please tell me. We can discuss it by e-mail
exchange.

 

I worked from ”The Recommendations” till the first frequently asked question
only.

 

Hope it will help  

 

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Tijani BEN JEMAA

Executive Director 

Mediterranean Federation of Internet Associations

Phone : + 216 70 825 231

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-----Message d'origine-----
De : owner-soac-newgtldapsup-wg@xxxxxxxxx
[mailto:owner-soac-newgtldapsup-wg@xxxxxxxxx] De la part de Avri Doria
Envoyé : vendredi 8 octobre 2010 17:44
À : soac-newgtldapsup-wg@xxxxxxxxx
Objet : [soac-newgtldapsup-wg] Revison 2.15

 

Hi,

 

I think I have captured the discussion form today's meeting.

 

I also:

 

- reviewed in terms of sub-numbering 

 

- moved the section on underserved language to being a subordinate part of
the pricing proposals. 

 

- converted most bullet to letter-numbered lists

 

- added the footnote on shared risk pools, though i would not take bets on
it being an adequate definition.

 

a.

Attachment: Draft Final Report JAS WG v2 15.2_Tijani.doc
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