Re: [soac-newgtldapsup-wg] ADDENDA - updated - comment

[Avri Doria <avri@xxxxxxx>]

Hi,

One minor, non substantive point.

At Line 

> 917  7.  Excerpt from Draft Final[1] Report -  New gTLD Applicant Support 
> (JAS WG)
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> [1] The Final Report  referenced here is actually the Milestone Report. The 
> document received a new title prior to publication.

I think either i the title itself or in the footnote, need to indicate that 
this is an except sent to the Board in order to meet a timeline for the 
Norwegian retreat.

I think a better title for the section might be:

Excerpt sent to ICANN Board in support of their new gTLD retreat.

a.



On 8 Nov 2010, at 16:03, Avri Doria wrote:

> 
> Hi,
> 
> At this point I want to start a 48 review period on this document ending 21 
> UTC onWednesday 10 Novemeber.
> 
> Please review it and let the list know of any issues you might have.
> 
> During that time, if anyone spots a substantive issue, the last call timer 
> will halt until the issue has been fixed and then will resume.  If there are 
> less than 24 hours left to the last call timer at the point of a halt, the 
> last call timer will be set to 24 hours so that everyone has some daytime in 
> which to review the last changes.
> 
> If anyone spots non substantive issue such as spelling etc.. Please let the 
> list know, but we will not pause the last call timer for that.
> 
> At the end of this timer, if there are no issues, we will call this document 
> done and ready for release.
> 
> thanks
> 
> a.
> 
> On 8 Nov 2010, at 15:36, Karla Valente wrote:
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>> Dear all,
>> 
>> Please find attached the updated ADDENDA based on our Friday discussions. 
>> Please note the attendance record is the only part missing, which will be 
>> added prior to publication.
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> Karla Valente
>> Product/Services Director
>> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) 
>> Direct:  + 1 310 301 3878  
>> Mobile:  +1 310 936 4639 
>> Skype: kdlvalente
>> 
>> <ADDENDA- JAS WG v2.23.doc>
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