Re: [soac-newgtldapsup-wg] Review of draft report

[Avri Doria <avri@xxxxxxx>]

Hi,

I have added comments to all of your comments.  I have attached a version with 
my comments added to yours.

Also, I had done my own review - although I did it by adding sticky notes on 
the PDF version of the file. I did not move those comments over to your review. 
 I have attached that as well.

a.

Attachment: Draft_Final_Report_JASWG_20110818_Reordered, clean-ag+ad.doc
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On 20 Aug 2011, at 20:11, Alan Greenberg wrote:

> I have reviewed the most recent copy of the report prepared by Rob and Seth, 
> and a copy with my comments are attached.
> 
> There are a number of comments which are substantive and it would be very 
> useful to know to what extent others agree or disagree with them.
> 
> Regards, Alan<Draft_Final_Report_JASWG_20110818_Reordered, clean-ag.doc>