Re: [gnso-irtpd] Updated Report

["James M. Bladel" <jbladel@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

Thanks, Alan.  Good recommendation.

J.


From: Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx>>
Date: Sunday, September 7, 2014 at 21:12
To: Lars Hoffmann <lars.hoffmann@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:lars.hoffmann@xxxxxxxxx>>, 
"gnso-irtpd@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-irtpd@xxxxxxxxx>" 
<gnso-irtpd@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-irtpd@xxxxxxxxx>>
Subject: Re: [gnso-irtpd] Updated Report

Sorry for the late comment.

Rec 13 now reads:


#13 The WG recommends that ICANN create and maintain a user-friendly, one-stop 
website containing all relevant information concerning disputed transfers and 
potential remedies to registrants. Such a website should be clearly accessible 
from the ICANN Registrants' Benefits and Responsibilities page ( 
https://www.icann.org/resources/pages/benefits-2013-09-16-en).

I would suggest that "should be clearly accessible from" be changed to "should 
be clearly accessible from or integrated into"

That gives those implementing the recommendation free reign to do this in the 
most logical and "user-friendly" manner.

I will be on at the start of the call, but will need to leave within a few 
minutes, so if there are any questions about this, I would hope that they can 
be addressed at the start of the meeting.

Thanks, Alan

At 29/08/2014 10:36 AM, Lars Hoffmann wrote:
Dear all,

Apologies for the late distribution of this update but thanks to the slight 
delay I was able to include comments from ICANN's GDD Team that might be useful 
to the Group's discussion.

It would be great if you found some time to go through the Report - especially 
the recommendations and observations in Section 4 and also consider the newly 
supplied comments from the GDD Team.

Main edits from the last version are related to Charter Question F and the 
additional recommendations 18 and 19. These can be found on pages 26, 27, 28, 
29 and 30 - including the new Recommendation #19.

Please also note the comments from ICANN's GDD Team on:

  *   page 14
  *   Page 16
  *   Page 18
  *   Page 22
  *   Page 24 (two comments)
  *   Page 26
  *   Page 28 (two comments)
  *   Page 30
  *   Page 42

Finally, please note that for ease of reading I have started the latest changes 
from a clean copy, meaning that only the edits from the last version are 
red-lined.

Many thanks and have a good weekend and those lucky enough to have Monday off - 
have a great Labour Day, too!

Best,
Lars