Re: [bc-gnso] FOR REVIEW: draft BC comment on GAC Advice on safeguards for new gTLDs

[Stéphane Van Gelder Consulting <stephvg@xxxxxxxxx>]

All,

Apologies, on my edits to Ron's text, I should have said that I had just 
modified the first part. I understand the full text for safeguards 6,7,8 is 
Ron's with some work from Steve. I did not mean that I deleted the whole text, 
just the first paragraph ;)

Thanks,

Stéphane

Le 16 mai 2013 à 10:22, Stéphane Van Gelder Consulting <stephvg@xxxxxxxxx> a 
écrit :

> Steve, Ron, others who have worked on this, thanks for a very impressive and 
> well drafted document.
> 
> Please find attached a redline with some edits which I suggest might make 
> useful additions. These center mainly around showing our appreciation for the 
> fact that there is a public comment period on this in the first place (I feel 
> this was missing from the current draft), asking for more open GAC meetings 
> (inline with recent discussions we've had on this list, plus Heather's own 
> comments). I have also deleted Ron's add to safeguard 6,7,8. I'm sorry, I 
> just don't agree with it and feel the original draft is sufficient to make 
> the BC's point.
> 
> Hope this helps.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> <BC Comment on GAC Advice for new gTLDs [DRAFT v1] SVG edits.docx>
> 
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> Le 15 mai 2013 à 22:40, Steve DelBianco <sdelbianco@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> a écrit :
> 
>> ICANN’s new gTLD Board Committee has requested public comment on how it 
>> should address GAC advice to establish safeguards for categories of new 
>> gTLDs. (link)
>> 
>> The BC has have held 3 conference calls on this topic (see minutes and 
>> transcripts on the BC Wiki).  Several BC members provided input, including 
>> text from Ron Andruff, Marilyn Cade, and Andrew Mack.  
>> 
>> Comment period closes 4-Jun.   That allows our regular 14-day review and 
>> approval period.  So, please REPLY ALL with your suggested edits and 
>> comments regarding this draft, before 29-May-2013.
>> 
>> Steve DelBianco
>> Vice chair for policy coordination
>> Business Constituency
>> 
>> 
>>  
>> <BC Comment on GAC Advice for new gTLDs [DRAFT v1].docx>
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