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Comments by Thomas Lowenhaupt

  • To: comments-stratplan-draft-09apr14@xxxxxxxxx
  • Subject: Comments by Thomas Lowenhaupt
  • From: Thomas Lowenhaupt <toml@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • Date: Tue, 03 Jun 2014 10:23:03 -0400

1. The Introduction begins:

"The core value of ICANN is our commitment to the bottom-up, multistakeholder approach."

This seems like an incomplete thought. Perhaps "to the decision making process" should be added.




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