[gnso-ccwg-dt] RE: FOR REVIEW: Revised Draft Principles

["Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Thanks Julie.

Here is a suggested edit for the second sentence in principle c) i): "CWG 
recommendations should be considered for possible inclusion in appropriate 
Policy Development Processes as applicable."

The first sentence of the rationale for c0 iii) is difficult to understand: "A 
CWG's charter could override that provision, with explicit reference, giving 
people notice that unless they participated in the CWG, they'd risk losing 
opportunity to object. "  I suggest we either delete it or rewrite so it would 
make sense to those outside the DT.  I think the second sentence is probably 
okay as written: "Limitations on the use of CWGs' output makes the groups 
themselves more flexible and easier to establish."  I'll let the DT decide what 
to do with the other suggestions on this rationale; the following one doesn't 
seem to fit: "At some point, the policy process reaches a final conclusion, at 
which point participants need to live with its outcomes or use ICANN's appeal 
mechanisms.  In the general case, that happens through GNSO PDP - explicitly 
not through CWGs."

Chuck

From: owner-gnso-ccwg-dt@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-ccwg-dt@xxxxxxxxx] On 
Behalf Of Julie Hedlund
Sent: Tuesday, December 13, 2011 5:06 PM
To: gnso-ccwg-dt@xxxxxxxxx
Subject: [gnso-ccwg-dt] FOR REVIEW: Revised Draft Principles

All,

Attached in Word and PDF are the revised Draft Principles based on the changes 
agreed to on today's call.  Note that the redline reflects new additions on the 
call.  Redlining was removed where edits from the list and the meeting on 22 
November have been accepted.  This also is posted to the wiki at:  
https://community.icann.org/display/gnsoccwgdraftteam/5.+Background+Documents.

Note: As discussed the rationale section is included, but it was agreed that it 
would not be included in the version sent to the Council.  However, further 
edits to the rationale text are encouraged as these may be useful to provide 
during Council discussions.

Our next call is scheduled for Tuesday, 20 December at UTC/1200 PST/1500 
EST/2000 London/2100 CET.  A reminder will be send prior to the call.

Best regards,

Julie

Attendees:  Jonathan Robinson (Chair), Chuck Gomes, Alan Greenberg, Mikey 
O'Conner, Wendy Seltzer, Jaime Wagner; Staff: Julie Hedlund, Liz Gasster, and 
Nathalie Peregrine
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