Re: [gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg] Please Comment: Request for Input Letters

["James M. Galvin" <jgalvin@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

I don’t have any objections.  I have made a couple of editorial suggestions to 
these letters for your consideration.  The most notable thing I did was change 
“contact data” to be “contact information” wherever it appeared.  I feel we 
should be consistent with our terminology.  I’m okay if you want to use 
something other than “contact information”.

I have attached redlined documents for your review.

Jim

Attachment: GACinput_final.doc
Description: MS-Word document

Attachment: individual GAC Letter_v2.doc
Description: MS-Word document

Attachment: Request for Input to SO-AC 23 January 2014.doc
Description: MS-Word document

On 30 Jan 2014, at 10:08 AM, Lars Hoffmann <lars.hoffmann@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

> Dear all,
> In case there were any problems opening the .docx document from my previous 
> email, here are the documents again, both in .doc versions. As Julie 
> mentioned earlier, if we do not hear any objections we will send the GACinput 
> letter as well as those to the GNSO's SG/C and ICANN's AC/SO out tomorrow. 
> Best wishes,
> Lars
> 
>  
> 
> From: Lars Hoffmann <lars.hoffmann@xxxxxxxxx>
> Date: Friday, January 24, 2014 4:30 PM
> To: "gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg@xxxxxxxxx" <gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg@xxxxxxxxx>
> Subject: [gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg] Please Comment: Request for Input Letters
> 
> Dear all,
> Having consulted with our Senior Director for GAC relations, Olof Nordling, I 
> have slightly extended the letter based on his input. In addition, please 
> also find attached a letter that you might want to send out to individual GAC 
> members; you can find the list of current GAC here Representatives - 
> https://gacweb.icann.org/display/gacweb/GAC+Representatives. As you see email 
> addresses are provided for both so we could send the letter to those members 
> you might think are most useful.
> Many thanks and best wishes,
> Lars
> 
> 
>   
> From: Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@xxxxxxxxx>
> Date: Thursday, January 23, 2014 4:32 PM
> To: "gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg@xxxxxxxxx" <gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg@xxxxxxxxx>
> Subject: [gnso-contactinfo-pdp-wg] Please Comment: Request for Input Letters
> 
> Dear PDP WG members,
> 
> Per the action items from today's meeting attached are two letters.  One is 
> for the GAC and one is for the other SOs and ACs.  These also are posted to 
> the wiki at https://community.icann.org/display/tatcipdp/23+January+2014 
> under "For Review."  The action is to finalize these letters so that they can 
> be sent by Friday, 31 January.  Please send any comments, questions, or 
> changes to this list by COB Tuesday, 28 January.  Staff will compile the 
> changes and send revised versions for approval by 30 January on the list.
> 
> Best regards,
> 
> Julie
> 
> Julie Hedlund, Policy Director
> <GACinput_final.doc><individual GAC Letter_v2.doc><Request for Input to SO-AC 
> 23 January 2014.doc>