Re: [gnso-dataprotection-thickwhois] Final Draft

[Carlton Samuels <carlton.samuels@xxxxxxxxx>]

Hi Don:
I made a few edits to fix small typos.

I'm good with this draft.

Thanks very much for leading this effort.

Best,
-Carlton


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On Thu, May 2, 2013 at 9:01 PM, Don Blumenthal <dblumenthal@xxxxxxx> wrote:

> A revision of the 4/29 document after taking edits and phone discussions
> into account. I don't think that any substance has changed. The revisions
> are more for clarity and further explanation.
>
> Please review ASAP so I'm sure that I addressed your concerns or that I
> didn't move you from "OK" to "you've got to be kidding."
>
> Thanks for all your help.
>
> Don
>
>

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