Re: [gnso-dow123] REMINDER: suggested revisions for recommendation #2

[KathrynKL@xxxxxxx]

I agree with Marilyn.  I think it would be helpful if someone would circulate 
a redline version -- showing the original and the edits.

Tim, what impact do you feel your changes make on the original? 

Thanks, Kathy

> Have you taken the edits received and prepared a final version and 
> circulated it from you and the chair? Did I miss that circulation? 
> 
> I only saw edits from Tim, but was expecting then a final version to be 
> circulated for last minute agreement by the TF. Again, if I missed that stage 
> of 
> the work, my apologies. 
> 
> I'm still not clear on what the constiutencies will be seeing and we should 
> all be clear on that. 
> 
>