[gnso-dow123] final report

[KathrynKL@xxxxxxx]

All:
Thanks to Maria and all for the fine final report!  I went through it 
carefully and would like to offer a few small changes. 

1)  Can we highlight and link to the URLs for the TF2 TOR and report in the 
Introduction?  I have searched for these URLs several times and since they are 
not highlighted, they are easy to overlook (and these are important background 
documents).  Hereâs the text I would like to update: 

=> âIn December 2003, WHOIS Task Force 2 was tasked with "document(ing) 
examples of existing privacy laws in regard to display/transmittal of data". 
(Task 
Force 2 terms of reference, point 4 of 'tasks and milestones';available at 
[HIGHLIGHT AND LINK TO:] 
http://gnso.icann.org/issues/whois-privacy/tor2.shtml). 

=> Task Force 2's preliminary report was published for public comment in June 
2004 (available at [HIGHLIGHT AND LINK TO:] 
http://gnso.icann.org/issues/whois-privacy/Whois-tf2-preliminary.html). 

2)  Can we create a printable version?   Currently, printing the final report 
cuts off the right edge.  I know there are ways around it, but many people 
may print the 33 pages before they realize the problem, and perhaps be too 
frustrated to reprint.  Can we include a link to the print version at the top?

3)  As agreed by the TF, I would like add teh link to the privacy laws table 
in the Introduction & Background section.  This table was created by TF2 Team 
1, and included in Appendix A of TF2âs report in a very hard-to-read version. 
 
Below is the edit I offered to TF and which was accepted at our final editing 
meeting on the Preliminary Report.  It was, however, missing from the posted 
preliminary report.  Could we add it now?

=> âTask Force 2âs preliminary report was published for public comment in 
June 2004 at 
http://gnso.icann.org/issues/whois-privacy/Whois-tf2-preliminary.html.  [ADD] 
Table of Privacy laws by country of registrar, [insert URL for 
Excel file] [END ADD]. The report found (in section 2.3) thatâ.â

Thanks,  
Kathy