[gnso-dow123] Additional edits

[KathrynKL@xxxxxxx]

I have not yet reviewed the version that Steve just circulated.  Based on the 
version that Olof circulated, here are some changes I see:

Section 5.2
1. Change Danny Oram to Andy Oram
2.  Mikki Barry is a she not a he.

Section 5.4
1.  Anonymous would be better as "Anonymous Blogger (forwarded by Andy Oram)" 

2. Rick Weingarten should be changed to "American Library Association" 
consistent with the listings of EPIC and the companies below.
3.  Domain Name Rights Coalition needs to be added to the list. 

Section 5.1
After adding DNRC to the list, Formulation 1 has *9* respondents expressing 
support.

Regards, Kathy