RE: [gnso-ff-pdp-may08] Outcome of survey + updated conclusions and recommendations chapter

[Joe St Sauver <joe@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

James mentioned:

#I agree that this language is not clear.  We are certainly making
#recommendations for future work, which may include policy development. 
#The current report, however, doesn't contain any immediate changes to
#consensus policy.
#
#Can you recommend alternative wording that would satisfy your concerns?

I would suggest striking most of the first paragraph under 
"Recommended Next Steps", leaving only, 

  "The Working Group would like to put forward the following ideas for 
  further consideration by the GNSO Council:"

That's really all that's needed by way of introductory text there.

Regards,

Joe