RE: [gnso-ff-pdp-may08] Outcome of survey + updated conclusions and recommendations chapter
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- Subject: RE: [gnso-ff-pdp-may08] Outcome of survey + updated conclusions and recommendations chapter
- From: "Mike Rodenbaugh" <icann@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Tue, 30 Jun 2009 12:01:16 -0700
I agree with Joe. Thx.
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[mailto:owner-gnso-ff-pdp-may08@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Joe St Sauver
Sent: Tuesday, June 30, 2009 9:43 AM
Subject: RE: [gnso-ff-pdp-may08] Outcome of survey + updated conclusions and
#I agree that this language is not clear. We are certainly making
#recommendations for future work, which may include policy development.
#The current report, however, doesn't contain any immediate changes to
#Can you recommend alternative wording that would satisfy your concerns?
I would suggest striking most of the first paragraph under "Recommended Next
Steps", leaving only,
"The Working Group would like to put forward the following ideas for
further consideration by the GNSO Council:"
That's really all that's needed by way of introductory text there.