RE: [gnso-ff-pdp-may08] PLEASE REVIEW - Updated version of fast flux initial report posted

["Greg Aaron" <gaaron@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Dear Mike:

Can you send a red-lined version, so we can see how the language was
changed?

Thanks,
--Greg



-----Original Message-----
From: owner-gnso-ff-pdp-may08@xxxxxxxxx
[mailto:owner-gnso-ff-pdp-may08@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Mike Rodenbaugh
Sent: Friday, December 19, 2008 11:06 AM
To: 'Fast Flux Workgroup'
Subject: RE: [gnso-ff-pdp-may08] PLEASE REVIEW - Updated version of fast
flux initial report posted

Here is my suggested text for Section 6, which leaves it largely intact but
takes out some of the language I found objectionable.

Thanks,
Mike

-----Original Message-----
From: owner-gnso-ff-pdp-may08@xxxxxxxxx
[mailto:owner-gnso-ff-pdp-may08@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Dave Piscitello
Sent: Thursday, December 11, 2008 10:31 AM
To: Marika Konings; Fast Flux Workgroup
Subject: Re: [gnso-ff-pdp-may08] PLEASE REVIEW - Updated version of fast
flux initial report posted


This reminds me of actions taken at last call, so a note to all...

Martin and I are editing the annex with the data graphs and hope to have
something shortly for list review.


On 12/8/08 9:37 AM  Dec 8, 2008, "Marika Konings" <marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx>
wrote:

> Dear All,
>
> As discussed on our call last Friday, I have posted on the Wiki
> (https://st.icann.org/pdp-wg-ff/index.cgi?fast_flux_pdp_wg) a OEclean¹
version
> of the draft Fast Flux Initial Report which incorporates all the changes
and
> edits of the previous version, as well as those discussed on Friday, to
> facilitate the review of the overall document. For your convenience, I
have
> posted both the PDF as well as the Word version. The previous version of
the
> draft Initial Report (dated 3 December) is still posted on the Wiki for
those
> of you that want to see which changes were incorporated in the OEclean¹
> version.
>
> Working Group members are strongly encouraged to review the whole
document,
> with the objective to finalise it on our next conference call on Friday 19
> December (please note that there will be no call on Friday 12 December).
> Please send any edits that are intended to clarify and/or improve
readability
> directly to me. Any other proposed changes, that go beyond the scope of
simple
> edits, should be sent to the mailing list for review and discussion. I
will
> produce an updated version that includes in track changes all edits and
> proposed changes prior to the next call. Note that this version already
> includes two proposed changes/additions in track changes that were posted
on
> the mailing list in the last few days.
>
> With best regards,
>
> Marika