Re: [gnso-ff-pdp-may08] Updated version of FF Initial Report posted for next conference call (16 January)

[Marika Konings <marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx>]

Thanks Joe for your feedback. The first two issues are easy to fix. With regard 
to the other items, the content of the executive summary is taken, in most 
cases verbatim, from the other sections of the report. If there are concerns or 
errors, we probably need to go back to the relevant sections of the report to 
make sure it is correctly stated there. We can discuss in further on the call 
on Friday, but you might want to review these issues in the other chapters of 
the report to see if/how your concerns could be addressed.

Best regards,

Marika

On 1/13/09 2:08 AM, "Joe St Sauver" <joe@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Hi Marika!

The document is looking pretty good! Some mechanical/typo issues:

-- line 49 "prepare and Issues Report" should probably be
           "prepare an Issues Report"

-- line 103 should probably read "without notice to or the
            consent of"

-- line 109 "(rapid) modification of IP addresses for malicious
            content hosts" -- reading that, if I didn't know better,
            my impression would be that a given host might be
            changing its IP address, but that's not what's happening.

            Each host keeps the same IP address it has always used,
            it is the *set* of hosts employed in conjunction with a
            given fully qualified domain name which quickly and
            repeatedly changes.

-- line 145 this section appears to be redundant with respect to
            185-193 (185-193 appears better to me than 145 et. sec.)

-- lines 156-158  I don't understand what this section is saying

-- line 187  do content distribution networks use FF nodes hosted on
             systems used w/o the consent of their owners? I think not.

             likewise, I don't believe free speech advocates use systems
             w/o the consent of their owners.

-- line 209  probably needs legal review or supporting evidence