RE: [gnso-ff-pdp-may08] Updated version of FF Initial Report posted for next conference call (16 January)

[Joe St Sauver <joe@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Hi Marika!

The document is looking pretty good! Some mechanical/typo issues:

-- line 49 "prepare and Issues Report" should probably be
           "prepare an Issues Report"

-- line 103 should probably read "without notice to or the 
            consent of"

-- line 109 "(rapid) modification of IP addresses for malicious
            content hosts" -- reading that, if I didn't know better,
            my impression would be that a given host might be 
            changing its IP address, but that's not what's happening. 

            Each host keeps the same IP address it has always used, 
            it is the *set* of hosts employed in conjunction with a 
            given fully qualified domain name which quickly and 
            repeatedly changes. 

-- line 145 this section appears to be redundant with respect to 
            185-193 (185-193 appears better to me than 145 et. sec.)

-- lines 156-158  I don't understand what this section is saying

-- line 187  do content distribution networks use FF nodes hosted on 
             systems used w/o the consent of their owners? I think not.

             likewise, I don't believe free speech advocates use systems
             w/o the consent of their owners.

-- line 209  probably needs legal review or supporting evidence