[gnso-ff-pdp-may08] Comment References, Interim Conclusions and Next Steps
Team:
Apologies for the delay on these materials.My schedule got away from me
beginning on Thursday, and so this task was pushed to the weekend.
In any event, please find attached two separate documents. The first
(spreadsheet) attaches references for the views of the WG on comments
received in response to the Initial Report. Please note that these are
in no way an attempt to re-categorize the comments. Instead, the goal
is to find the smallest number of sections / topics that sufficiently
address -all- comments. I have included some sample language for each
topic (needs further word-smithing), which can be used individually or
worked into the comment analysis summary.
Next, I have made many changes to section 8 ("Interim Conclusions") and
section 9 ("Next Steps"). Please note that if you believe the text does
not accurately characterize the WG findings, or if there are significant
omissions, we can work through these on our call next Wednesday.
Thank you,
J.
Attachment:
Comment Analysis - WG View and References.xls Attachment:
Interim Conclusions and Next Steps.doc
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