[gnso-ff-pdp-may08] For review - materials for next call
Dear All, Please find attached a revised version of chapter 8 and 9 that has in track changes the proposed changes made by James and Mike, as well as suggested edits provided by Rod (see http://forum.icann.org/lists/gnso-ff-pdp-may08/msg01037.html) -- Rod, please do check whether I have reflected your proposed changes correctly and in the right places. I thought it might be easier to review the proposed changes in this way, instead of incorporating them in the draft final report. In addition, an updated version of the draft final report has been posted on the wiki (https://st.icann.org/pdp-wg-ff/index.cgi?fast_flux_pdp_wg) that includes a new annex VI on the Mannheim formula as proposed by Joe, and a reference to this annex that has inserted on page 50 (please provide your feedback on whether you think this is an appropriate place). As a reminder, some of the other outstanding action items are: * Provide feedback on where reference to Ryan Haight act has been included in the public comments categorization document so that group can decide whether to leave it on or take it out (Marika) - a reference to the Ryan Haight Act can be found in section 4.a of the public comments categorization document. * Provide draft language for inclusion in chapter 9 regarding best practices and role of ICANN (Ihab) * Review proposed changes for chapter 8 and 9 (All) * Send email to Mike Rodenbaugh asking whether he would like to propose an alternative text for section 5.8/5.9 (Marika) - Done, but no feedback received to date. With best regards, Marika Attachment:
FF-WG Interim Conclusions and Next Steps - updated 9 June 2009.doc
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