[gnso-frn-dt] For Review - Updated version of FRN Report
All, Please find attached an updated version which reflects Paul's comment. In addition, I've made a couple of additional edits, with, amongst others, proposed language for addressing the issue outlined below, proposed wording for the DT's view on option 2 ('The DT considers this option worthy of further discussion by the GNSO Council') and retweaked example language for option 1. To facilitate review, I've accepted all changes from the previous version so you can see the proposed changes in this version. If others agree with Paul's approach to try and coordinate final edits on the list, please share your views as soon as possible. Thanks, Marika On 27/02/12 22:32, "Paul Diaz" <pdiaz@xxxxxxx<mailto:pdiaz@xxxxxxx>> wrote: Great work as usual, Marika. RE: DT Option for Next Steps #3 ("Add this issue to the upcoming PDP on the RAA"), do we have any sense of how long it may be before the "scoping conversations" yield an output? If not (and/or if it's unlikely to happen in the near term), this should be noted as a 'con' for this option. Otherwise, I think this is pretty much good to go. If others DT members concur, perhaps we can coordinate our final edits on the list and forgo Thursday's (later than usual) call? If we still need that call @ 2130 UTC, maybe we can keep it short? Best, P On Feb 27, 2012, at 8:44 AM, Marika Konings wrote: Dear All, Please find attached an updated version of the Fake Renewal Notices Report which reflects the discussion of our last meeting. Feel free to share any comments / edits you may have with the mailing list. One thing the DT may want to consider is whether it still make sense to have the options listed in order of preference, or, seeing that not all options are mutually exclusive and the recommendation is to put the report out for public comment first, whether it would make more sense to not to specifically say that it is in order of preference, but let the DT view for each option speak for itself. With best regards, Marika <Fake Renewal Notices Report - Draft - 27 February 2012.doc> Attachment:
Fake Renewal Notices Report - Draft - Updated 29 February 2012.doc
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