RE: [gnso-igo-ingo] Final Report v1.5.1

["Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Thanks Berry.

In the WG Response column of the Public Comment Review Tool, individual 
initials are shown representing the WG member who made a comment.  I think we 
should either remove the initials or provide a key that defines who the person 
is.  I think the former is the better option.

I also think that we could consider changing the title of the last column from 
'Recommended Action' to 'Action Taken', in which case we should change the 
tenses of some of the verbs (e.g., "update final report" to "updated final 
report".  But the more I think about this, the more I think that it might not 
be worth the effort, so it might be better to leave this column as is with the 
understanding that the tool was used to guide changes in the report.

Chuck

From: owner-gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx] On 
Behalf Of Berry Cobb
Sent: Thursday, November 07, 2013 12:33 AM
To: gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx
Subject: [gnso-igo-ingo] Final Report v1.5.1

WG Members,

Please find attached the latest version of the Final Report based on today's WG 
discussions.  We will review this version at tomorrow's WG meeting scheduled 
for 14 UTC.  We also have a session scheduled for Friday at the same time.  A 
few notes to consider about the Final Report:

*         All suggested changes to the Final report shall be submitted to the 
list by 8 November 2013, 19:00 UTC.  We must meet the 10 Nov 2013, 23:59 UTC 
deadline to submit the report and motion to the GNSO Council.

*         I only included the red-line Word version of the report.  I also 
included a clean PDF version for your reference.  If you have any suggested 
changes or edits to the Final Report, please make them in the Word document and 
submit to the mailing list.  I will then import them into the master.

*         To meet the stated deadline above and per our discussion in the WG 
meeting today, the Minority Statements have been extracted from the Final 
Report and they will be submitted as supplement attachments to the Final 
Report.  I included four attachments that represent the minority positions that 
were included in the draft version of the report.  WG members have until 15 
November 2013, 19:00 UTC to submit a revision or new minority statement for 
your respective group.

*         As mentioned, the Public Comment Review Tool and the Consensus Call 
documents will also be included as supplements to the Final Report so that 
readers of the report may easily reference feedback from the community and 
stakeholders.

*         The draft resolution statements document will be delivered to the 
mailing list via a separate email.

Thank you for everyone's participation today, and speak to you tomorrow.

Thank you.  B

Berry Cobb
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