RE: [gnso-igo-ingo] Revised Draft Motion for Review/Comments

["Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

The edits Claudia submitted look fine to me.

Chuck

From: owner-gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx] On 
Behalf Of Claudia MACMASTER TAMARIT
Sent: Thursday, November 07, 2013 11:20 AM
To: Mary Wong; Berry Cobb Mail; gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx
Subject: RE: [gnso-igo-ingo] Revised Draft Motion for Review/Comments

Dear Mary, and all,

Please see our few edits to the draft motion.

Sincerely,
Claudia

From: owner-gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:owner-gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx> 
[mailto:owner-gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx]<mailto:[mailto:owner-gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx]>
 On Behalf Of Mary Wong
Sent: 2013-11-07 15:57
To: Berry Cobb Mail; gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx>
Subject: Re: [gnso-igo-ingo] Revised Draft Motion for Review/Comments

Dear all, attached please find a revised version of the draft motion that 
includes all the edits suggested by Jim and the IOC team (except for the two 
changes to the Whereas clauses discussed earlier today), addition of a Whereas 
clause referencing the minority statements, addition of a Resolved clause 
referencing those recommendations receiving Strong Support but with Significant 
Opposition, and adding references to the Exception Procedures for the 
Implementation Review Team.

Please use this version (if possible) to base your feedback on. As stated on 
the call today, it would be greatly appreciated if you could send any comments 
or concerns - even in rough form - to me and/or the WG by tonight, so that we 
can have a further revised motion for your (hopefully final) review on the call 
tomorrow.

Thanks so much!

Cheers
Mary

Mary Wong
Senior Policy Director
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)
Telephone: +1 603 574 4892
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From: Berry Cobb Mail <mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx<mailto:mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>>
Date: Thursday, November 7, 2013 12:32 AM
To: "gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx>" 
<gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx>>
Subject: [gnso-igo-ingo] Final Report v1.5.1

WG Members,

Please find attached the latest version of the Final Report based on today's WG 
discussions.  We will review this version at tomorrow's WG meeting scheduled 
for 14 UTC.  We also have a session scheduled for Friday at the same time.  A 
few notes to consider about the Final Report:

*         All suggested changes to the Final report shall be submitted to the 
list by 8 November 2013, 19:00 UTC.  We must meet the 10 Nov 2013, 23:59 UTC 
deadline to submit the report and motion to the GNSO Council.

*         I only included the red-line Word version of the report.  I also 
included a clean PDF version for your reference.  If you have any suggested 
changes or edits to the Final Report, please make them in the Word document and 
submit to the mailing list.  I will then import them into the master.

*         To meet the stated deadline above and per our discussion in the WG 
meeting today, the Minority Statements have been extracted from the Final 
Report and they will be submitted as supplement attachments to the Final 
Report.  I included four attachments that represent the minority positions that 
were included in the draft version of the report.  WG members have until 15 
November 2013, 19:00 UTC to submit a revision or new minority statement for 
your respective group.

*         As mentioned, the Public Comment Review Tool and the Consensus Call 
documents will also be included as supplements to the Final Report so that 
readers of the report may easily reference feedback from the community and 
stakeholders.

*         The draft resolution statements document will be delivered to the 
mailing list via a separate email.

Thank you for everyone's participation today, and speak to you tomorrow.

Thank you.  B

Berry Cobb
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)
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