RE: [gnso-igo-ingo] Final Report v1.5.1 - PCRT
Hi All, Thank you for the feedback, Chuck. I've updated the PCRT with your proposed changes. If any other members have any suggestions for edits, please send them to the list. Per our discussion this will become a supplement to the Final Repot labeled, "H - IGO-INGO_PCRT_FinalReport_08-Nov-2013.PDF". I will send the following supplement list along with the Final Report: . A - IGO-INGO_MinorityPosition_RCRC.PDF . B - not used [to maintain continuity with the report, this is an empty placeholder for the IOC] . C - IGO-INGO_MinorityPosition_IGO.PDF . D - IGO-INGO_MinorityPosition_INGO.PDF . E - IGO-INGO_MinorityPosition_NCSG.PDF . F - IGO-INGO_MinorityPosition_ALAC.PDF [not submitted yet] . G - IGO-INGO_FinalReport_ConsensusCall_02-Nov-2013.PDF . H - IGO-INGO_PCRT_FinalReport_08-Nov-2013.PDF Thank you. B Berry Cobb Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) 720.839.5735 <mailto:mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx @berrycobb From: Gomes, Chuck [mailto:cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx] Sent: Thursday, November 07, 2013 13:40 To: Berry Cobb; gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx Subject: RE: [gnso-igo-ingo] Final Report v1.5.1 Thanks Berry. In the WG Response column of the Public Comment Review Tool, individual initials are shown representing the WG member who made a comment. I think we should either remove the initials or provide a key that defines who the person is. I think the former is the better option. I also think that we could consider changing the title of the last column from 'Recommended Action' to 'Action Taken', in which case we should change the tenses of some of the verbs (e.g., "update final report" to "updated final report". But the more I think about this, the more I think that it might not be worth the effort, so it might be better to leave this column as is with the understanding that the tool was used to guide changes in the report. Chuck From: owner-gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Berry Cobb Sent: Thursday, November 07, 2013 12:33 AM To: gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx Subject: [gnso-igo-ingo] Final Report v1.5.1 WG Members, Please find attached the latest version of the Final Report based on today's WG discussions. We will review this version at tomorrow's WG meeting scheduled for 14 UTC. We also have a session scheduled for Friday at the same time. A few notes to consider about the Final Report: . All suggested changes to the Final report shall be submitted to the list by 8 November 2013, 19:00 UTC. We must meet the 10 Nov 2013, 23:59 UTC deadline to submit the report and motion to the GNSO Council. . I only included the red-line Word version of the report. I also included a clean PDF version for your reference. If you have any suggested changes or edits to the Final Report, please make them in the Word document and submit to the mailing list. I will then import them into the master. . To meet the stated deadline above and per our discussion in the WG meeting today, the Minority Statements have been extracted from the Final Report and they will be submitted as supplement attachments to the Final Report. I included four attachments that represent the minority positions that were included in the draft version of the report. WG members have until 15 November 2013, 19:00 UTC to submit a revision or new minority statement for your respective group. . As mentioned, the Public Comment Review Tool and the Consensus Call documents will also be included as supplements to the Final Report so that readers of the report may easily reference feedback from the community and stakeholders. . The draft resolution statements document will be delivered to the mailing list via a separate email. Thank you for everyone's participation today, and speak to you tomorrow. Thank you. B Berry Cobb Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) 720.839.5735 mail@xxxxxxxxxxxxx @berrycobb Attachment:
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