[gnso-improvem-impl-sc] RE: Revised language regarding suspension / termination of a PDP
Marisa, I have taken your language and condensed it a bit as well as trying to clarify that if there is no recommendation from the WG before the Council, then there would have to be a properly seconded motion in order to require the Council to seek public comment. I don't think anyone was intending to completely eliminate the requirement for a written report when the WG was making the recommendation. That written Termination Report or Suspension Report was mandatory where the recommendation for suspension or termination came from the WG. That improvement was at the very heart of this initiative and so that language has been added back where you had deleted it. On a more minor note, I also noticed that the earlier paragraphs in this same section refer to "PDP Team" and not "PDP Working Group". So I changed all the references to PDP Team. It seems it should be one or the other consistently throughout unless there is some difference I do not appreciate between a PDP Team and PDP WG. I also think it would be fine for all references to be to PDP WG and that is the term I hear used more often. Attached is a new Feb 8 draft with the changes accepted. While working on this, I ended up losing track of the status of my redline and would appreciate it if you could run a comparison btween this and the language the SCI reviewed in its last call so that all members can see the proposed changes in my draft. Thank you, Anne [cid:673301100@09022013-0625]Anne E. Aikman-Scalese Of Counsel Lewis and Roca LLP • Suite 700 One South Church Avenue • Tucson, Arizona 85701-1611 Tel (520) 629-4428 • Fax (520) 879-4725 AAikman@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:AAikman@xxxxxxxxx> • www.LewisandRoca.com/Aikman<http://www.lewisandroca.com/Aikman> P Please consider the environment before printing this e-mail. This e-mail contains legally privileged and confidential information intended only for the individual or entity named within the message. If the reader of this message is not the intended recipient, or the agent responsible to deliver it to the intended recipient, you are hereby notified that any review, dissemination, distribution or copying of this communication is prohibited. If this communication was received in error, please notify us by reply e-mail and delete the original message. ________________________________ From: owner-gnso-improvem-impl-sc@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-improvem-impl-sc@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Marika Konings Sent: Thursday, February 07, 2013 4:10 AM To: gnso-improvem-impl-sc@xxxxxxxxx Subject: [gnso-improvem-impl-sc] Revised language regarding suspension / termination of a PDP Dear All, As discussed yesterday, please find attached for your review the suggested modifications to the last version of the language concerning the termination or suspension of a PDP. With best regards, Marika ________________________________ For more information about Lewis and Roca LLP, please go to www.lewisandroca.com<http://www.lewisandroca.com/>. Phoenix (602)262-5311 Reno (775)823-2900 Tucson (520)622-2090 Albuquerque (505)764-5400 Las Vegas (702)949-8200 Silicon Valley (650)391-1380 This message is intended only for the use of the individual or entity to which it is addressed. If the reader of this message is not the intended recipient, or the employee or agent responsible for delivering the message to the intended recipient, you are hereby notified that any dissemination, distribution or copying of this message is strictly prohibited. If you have received this communication in error, please notify us immediately by replying to the sender of this E-Mail by return E-Mail or by telephone. In accordance with Internal Revenue Service Circular 230, we advise you that if this email contains any tax advice, such tax advice was not intended or written to be used, and it cannot be used, by any taxpayer for the purpose of avoiding penalties that may be imposed on the taxpayer. Attachment:
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