Re: [gnso-irtpd] Updated Report

["James M. Bladel" <jbladel@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

Thank you, Lars.

Team:  Given that we have next Monday off, please use the time between now and 
our next call (8 September) to review the following items:


  1.  List of GDD comments provided by Lars (below)
  2.  Text of Recommendations
  3.  Overall proof-reading and readability.

Please submit your comments/edits to the list no later than Saturday 6 
September!  Otherwise they will need to be raised during our call.

Thanks-

J.


From: Lars Hoffmann <lars.hoffmann@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:lars.hoffmann@xxxxxxxxx>>
Date: Friday, August 29, 2014 at 9:36
To: "gnso-irtpd@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-irtpd@xxxxxxxxx>" 
<gnso-irtpd@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-irtpd@xxxxxxxxx>>
Subject: [gnso-irtpd] Updated Report

Dear all,

Apologies for the late distribution of this update but thanks to the slight 
delay I was able to include comments from ICANN's GDD Team that might be useful 
to the Group's discussion.

It would be great if you found some time to go through the Report - especially 
the recommendations and observations in Section 4 and also consider the newly 
supplied comments from the GDD Team.

Main edits from the last version are related to Charter Question F and the 
additional recommendations 18 and 19. These can be found on pages 26, 27, 28, 
29 and 30 - including the new Recommendation #19.

Please also note the comments from ICANN's GDD Team on:

  *   page 14
  *   Page 16
  *   Page 18
  *   Page 22
  *   Page 24 (two comments)
  *   Page 26
  *   Page 28 (two comments)
  *   Page 30
  *   Page 42

Finally, please note that for ease of reading I have started the latest changes 
from a clean copy, meaning that only the edits from the last version are 
red-lined.

Many thanks and have a good weekend and those lucky enough to have Monday off - 
have a great Labour Day, too!

Best,
Lars