RE: [gnso-osc-csg] OSC-CSG WT Action: Review Draft Charter Revisions from 27 March Meeting

["Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Thanks Julie.  I have just two comments:

1.      
        Grammatical edit in the first sentence of Section VI that
currently reads, "Set forth below are a preliminary list of deliverables
for the GNSO Stakeholder Group And Constituency Operations Team (GCOT)."
It should either say "Set forth below is a preliminary list of
deliverables for the GNSO Stakeholder Group And Constituency Operations
Team (GCOT)."  or "Set forth below are preliminary deliverables for the
GNSO Stakeholder Group And Constituency Operations Team (GCOT)."  
2.      
        For the charter we send to the OSC for approval, I think the
cells in the checklist at the end of Section VI should be blank and not
include the lead and action info that you added.  At the same time we
should keep this table updated as you have done on the wiki, separate
from the charter.

Chuck


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        From: owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx
[mailto:owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Julie Hedlund
        Sent: Friday, March 27, 2009 4:17 PM
        To: gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx
        Subject: [gnso-osc-csg] OSC-CSG WT Action: Review Draft Charter
Revisions from 27 March Meeting
        
        
        Dear Work Team Members,
         
        As we discussed in today's meeting of the Stakeholder Group and
Constituency Operations Work Team, Olga Cavelli asked me to send to you
for review the draft of the Work Team charter with edits incorporated
from Chuck Gomes and from comments provided in today's meeting.  
         
        I have attached the draft of the Work Team charter as a Word
document and I also have included the revisions in the Wiki at:
https://st.icann.org/icann-osc/index.cgi?constituency_operations_team.
You may provide your comments and edits to the Wiki, to this email
distribution list, and/or as tracked changes to the attached document.
         
        Thank you very much and please let me know if you have any
questions.
         
        Best regards,
         
        Julie
         
        Julie Hedlund