RE: [gnso-osc-csg] OSC-CSG WT Action: Review Draft Charter Revisions from 27 March Meeting

[SS Kshatriy <sskshatriy@xxxxxxxxx>]

I will appreciate Chuck's keeness for details and exactness.
SS

--- On Mon, 3/30/09, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

From: Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
Subject: RE: [gnso-osc-csg] OSC-CSG WT Action: Review Draft Charter Revisions 
from 27 March Meeting
To: jahedlund@xxxxxxxxxxx, gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx
Date: Monday, March 30, 2009, 12:06 PM



Thanks Julie.  I have just two comments:


Grammatical edit in the first sentence of Section VI that currently reads, "Set 
forth below are a preliminary list of deliverables for the GNSO Stakeholder 
Group And Constituency Operations Team (GCOT)."  It should either say "Set 
forth below is a preliminary list of deliverables for the GNSO Stakeholder 
Group And Constituency Operations Team (GCOT)."  or "Set forth below are 
preliminary deliverables for the GNSO Stakeholder Group And Constituency 
Operations Team (GCOT)."  

For the charter we send to the OSC for approval, I think the cells in the 
checklist at the end of Section VI should be blank and not include the lead and 
action info that you added.  At the same time we should keep this table updated 
as you have done on the wiki, separate from the charter.
Chuck




From: owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx] On 
Behalf Of Julie Hedlund
Sent: Friday, March 27, 2009 4:17 PM
To: gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx
Subject: [gnso-osc-csg] OSC-CSG WT Action: Review Draft Charter Revisions from 
27 March Meeting



Dear Work Team Members,
 
As we discussed in today's meeting of the Stakeholder Group and Constituency 
Operations Work Team, Olga Cavelli asked me to send to you for review the draft 
of the Work Team charter with edits incorporated from Chuck Gomes and from 
comments provided in today's meeting.  
 
I have attached the draft of the Work Team charter as a Word document and I 
also have included the revisions in the Wiki at: 
https://st.icann.org/icann-osc/index.cgi?constituency_operations_team. ; You may 
provide your comments and edits to the Wiki, to this email distribution list, 
and/or as tracked changes to the attached document.
 
Thank you very much and please let me know if you have any questions.
 
Best regards,
 
Julie
 
Julie Hedlund