RE: [gnso-osc-csg] Subtask 1-Draft 3-on Claudio's Comments

[SS Kshatriy <sskshatriy@xxxxxxxxx>]

Dear Claudio,
1. I have seen your comments circulated earlier. Those are the comments on 
Victoria's comments.
Not many of Victoria's comments are accommodated in Draft 3.
It will be difficult to co-relate and understand comments from different 
documents and I may make mistakes.
Hence, I will request you to give your comments on Draft 3 wherever you want to.
 
2. Section 2 changes are re-produced below:
       In Section 2, item be says, "All Groups must offer membership to natural 
persons or ..    ..          ..          
SS        Chuck Gomes concern accommodated.
‘All Groups must offer membership to natural persons or individuals as well as 
to entities with legal personality such as corporations.’ Is revised as:
 ‘All Groups must offer membership to natural persons or individuals as well as 
to entities with legal personality such as corporations. However, anybody 
applying for membership shall meet the membership criteria laid down by 
individual Group with ICANN’s approval.
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I am not able to understand; where is conflict?
Pl be a little more specific.
best,
SS
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--- On Sat, 10/3/09, Claudio Di Gangi <cdigangi@xxxxxxxx> wrote:


From: Claudio Di Gangi <cdigangi@xxxxxxxx>
Subject: RE: [gnso-osc-csg] Subtask 1-Draft 3-ss
To: "SS Kshatriy" <sskshatriy@xxxxxxxxx>, "OSC-CSG Work Team" 
<gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: Saturday, October 3, 2009, 6:15 AM



SS,

I circulated comments on Subtask1 yesterday. Am I correct you received those, 
and will incorporate them into the next draft?

Also, the change made on item 2 appears to contain conflicting recommendations. 
can you clarify what your intention is on that item?

thanks

Claudio
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From: owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx [owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of 
SS Kshatriy [sskshatriy@xxxxxxxxx]
Sent: Saturday, October 03, 2009 2:02 AM
To: OSC-CSG Work Team
Subject: [gnso-osc-csg] Subtask 1-Draft 3-ss

Dear WT Members,
Attached is:
1. Cover Note on Subtask1-Draft 3 and,
2. Subtask1-Draft 3.
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It is important to read Subtask1-Draft 3 along with Cover Note Subtask1-Draft 3.
Please send your feedback/comments by Thursday, October 08, 2009.
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Please see that your feedback/comments are backed by reasoning and contribute 
to 'GNSO Improvements'.

best regards,
SS