RE: [gnso-osc-csg] ACTION REQUESTED: Task 2 Outreach Document for Review

["Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

My compliments to the sub-group for all the work.  My comments,
questions and possible edits are highlighted in the attached file.
Warning: there are a lot of them, but please don't take that in a
critical way.  I simply shared all the thoughts that came to mind as I
reviewed the document as a new comer.  It may be in some cases that I
misread the intent or did not understand the rationale behind the
recommendations.

 

I will be happy to discuss my input with the sub-group and/or the full
WT, but I may not be able to make the call this coming Friday or the
following Friday.  On 27 August I will be in Tokyo for an ICANN
Registry/Registrar regional meeting.  On 2 September I will be on
vacation.

 

Chuck

 

From: owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx]
On Behalf Of Olga Cavalli
Sent: Monday, August 23, 2010 5:13 PM
To: OSC-CSG Work Team
Subject: Fwd: [gnso-osc-csg] ACTION REQUESTED: Task 2 Outreach Document
for Review

 

Thanks Julie!
Please note that this document is for full Work Team Review!!!
Ideally we should agree in a final text next Friday and then we can send
it to the OSC.
Comments are welcome.
Best regards
Olga



---------- Forwarded message ----------
From: Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: 2010/8/23
Subject: [gnso-osc-csg] ACTION REQUESTED: Task 2 Outreach Document for
Review
To: gnso-osc-csg <gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx>



Dear Work Team members,

At our sub-team meeting last Friday, the Work Team asked me to edit the
latest version of the draft Task 2 working document to clean it up and
prepare it for review by the full Work Team.

Your action is requested: The attached draft Task 2 Working Document is
ready for your review.  Please send comments to the list or, if you have
specific edits, please include them as tracked edits and send them to me
no later than  1900 UTC/1200 PDT/1500 EDT on Thursday, 26 August, so
that I may incorporate them into a revised document for discussion at
our regular meeting on Friday, 27 August at 1300 UTC.  

Please note:  The document is now being discussed at the full Work Team
level so we urge you to comment on the document and to attend Friday's
meeting.  The document also has been posted to the wiki page at: 
https://st.icann.org/icann-osc/index.cgi?constituency_operations_team.

Thank you and please let me know if you have any questions.

Best regards,

Julie

Attachment: OSC COT Task 2 Working Document 23 Aug 2010 (2) with Gomes edits.doc
Description: OSC COT Task 2 Working Document 23 Aug 2010 (2) with Gomes edits.doc