Re: AW: [gnso-osc] Draft Invitation-Announcement To Join Work Teams

[Stéphane Van Gelder <stephane.vangelder@xxxxxxxxx>]

I¹m very impressed with the edited version. It manages to keep the energy
and enthusiasm of Rob¹s original text while at the same time presenting all
the ³need to know² essentials on page 1 and the details on the following
pages.

A very good solution in my view for those who won¹t have the courage or the
time to go beyond the first page. They¹ll still get the gist of why it¹s
important to get involved.

Considering the quality of this work, I will wait until the message is
finalised so that I can send it as-is to the RC.

In addition, Wolf-Ulrich, your proposal for incentives is an interesting
one. What kind of incentives did you have in mind?

Thanks,

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Le 17/12/08 11:38, « Knoben, Wolf-Ulrich » <KnobenW@xxxxxxxxxx> a écrit :

> Trying to make the announcement more effective I rearranged the proposal (Main
> page + background information) as attached. That's no content change, just an
> communication improvement, hopefully.
>  
> BTW since finding volunteers seems to be the real challenge, why shouldn't we
> - in worst case only - think about incentives?
>  
> 
> Best regards
> Wolf-Ulrich
> 
>  
> 
> 
> Von: owner-gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx] Im Auftrag von
> Gomes, Chuck
> Gesendet: Mittwoch, 17. Dezember 2008 00:53
> An: Robert Hoggarth; gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx
> Betreff: RE: [gnso-osc] Draft Invitation-Announcement To Join Work Teams
> 
> Thanks Rob (and probably Liz and Ken too).  To get discussion going, I
> proposed some edits and inserted some comments that are highlighted in the
> attached file.  To minimize confusion, I suggest that everyone use the
> attached version, understanding that you should feel free to disagree with my
> suggestions and suggest new changes.
>  
> Chuck
> 
>>  
>>  
>> 
>>  From: owner-gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx  [mailto:owner-gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf
>> Of Robert  Hoggarth
>> Sent: Tuesday, December 16, 2008 6:10 PM
>> To:  gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx
>> Subject: [gnso-osc] Draft Invitation-Announcement  To Join Work Teams
>> 
>>  
>> Dear OSC  Members:
>> 
>> Pursuant to your discussion on yesterday¹s call, attached  please find a
>> draft announcement seeking volunteers for the GNSO  ³Improvements²
>> Implementation Work Teams.  The announcement is currently  designed for all
>> five GNSO work teams (three OSC teams and two PPSC  teams).
>> 
>> Decision/feedback points include:
>> 
>>  
>> * General edits and  comments regarding form, style and text;
>> * Announcement  methodology ­ is the group OK with email announcement as well
>> as ICANN web  site announcement?
>> * Contact points ­ left  blank in the draft, to whom do you think expressions
>> of interest should be  directed?
>> * Statements of Interest  ­ do you think these are appropriate for work
>> teams?
>> 
>> Please direct all comments to the entire  list.
>> 
>> Best regards,
>> 
>> Rob Hoggarth
>> 
>