RE: [gnso-pednr-dt] For Final Review - Updated PEDNR Initial Report

[berrycobb@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx]

Marika & PEDNER team

My apologies for the late submission, but my proposed changes are  
minor.  See below:
I would like to extend a HUGE THANK YOU to Marika for her dedicated  
support and sense of urgency to this WG and this work product.  I  
swear there has to be 3 Marikas employed by ICANN.
Mis-spelled words:
p. 10: communcations - communications
p. 11: communcations - communications
p. 14: explicitely - explicitly
p. 15: explicitely - explicitly
p. 18: Recomend - Recommend
p. 30: anonymized is not a word, suggest restatement
p. 61: explicitely - explicitly
p. 63: explicitely - explicitly
p. 67: ther - their
p. 70: Recomend - Recommend
p. 71: registred - registered
p. 76: Queston 5 - Question 5
p. 81: itwas - it was

p. 38: I suggest removing all the redline, as any of the numbers  
introduced here are all speculative.  The numbers offered by  
compliance are only in regards to how users are likely  
mis-categorizing issue tickets.
Lastly, and too late for this round, but I would prefer to which  
member voted which direction for each question within the survey.
Thank you and hope to see most of you in Brussels.  Cheers!  B

Berry Cobb
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