Re: [gnso-pednr-dt] For review - draft Final Report
I've made a few additional changes to Section 6 (Information from ICANN Compliance Staff), please see updated version attached. In relation to the proposed changes to section 3, it might be worth noting that almost all this content was literally taking from the Issue Report. My suggestion was to move that section to one of the annexes and instead focus the attention on the section with the deliberations of the Working Group, currently section 7 (maybe consider moving that up). If the WG agrees with this approach, it might make more sense to focus on the content of that section and add any information people feel is missing to appreciate the discussion and deliberations of the WG, instead of trying to rewrite the content from the Issue Report. Best regards, Marika From: Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx>> Date: Sun, 23 Jan 2011 20:43:01 -0800 To: PEDNR <gnso-pednr-dt@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-pednr-dt@xxxxxxxxx>> Subject: RE: [gnso-pednr-dt] For review - draft Final Report And my comments on Oliver's. Alan At 22/01/2011 07:16 AM, Oliver Hope wrote: Hi All, I‚ve had a look through the document and have added a few changes/suggestions/questions. Just my thoughts on a few points really so it will be interesting to see if any of you agree with me or not! Kind regards, and look forward to speaking to you all on Tuesday. Oliver Hope Finance & Operations Director MeshDigital +44(0)1483 304030 oliver.hope@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx<mailto:oliver.hope@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> From: Marika Konings [ mailto:marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx] Sent: 05 January 2011 12:16 To: PEDNR Subject: [gnso-pednr-dt] For review - draft Final Report Dear All, As discussed during yesterday's meeting, please find attached the latest version of the draft Final Report including line numbers to facilitate review. You are requested to review this document and share your comments, suggestions and/or proposed edits with the mailing list at the latest by 24 January 2011. Please note that the recommendations are being worked on separately from this document and will be inserted once agreed upon by the Working Group. With best regards, Marika Content-Type: application/msword; name="PEDNR PDP Draft Final Report - 8" November 2010 with line numbers (2).doc" Content-Description: PEDNR PDP Draft Final Report - 8 November 2010 with line numbers (2).doc Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="PEDNR PDP Draft Final Report - 8" November 2010 with line numbers (2).doc"; size=880704; creation-date="Fri, 21 Jan 2011 11:37:25 GMT"; modification-date="Fri, 21 Jan 2011 11:50:34 GMT"
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