Re: [gnso-pednr-dt] For review - draft Final Report

[Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx>]

I supprt this. Alan

At 25/01/2011 04:30 AM, Marika Konings wrote:
> I've made a few additional changes to Section 6 
> (Information from ICANN Compliance Staff), 
> please see updated version attached.
> In relation to the proposed changes to section 
> 3, it might be worth noting that almost all this 
> content was literally taking from the Issue 
> Report. My suggestion was to move that section 
> to one of the annexes and instead focus the 
> attention on the section with the deliberations 
> of the Working Group, currently section 7 (maybe 
> consider moving that up). If the WG agrees with 
> this approach, it might make more sense to focus 
> on the content of that section and add any 
> information people feel is missing to appreciate 
> the discussion and deliberations of the WG, 
> instead of trying to rewrite the content from the Issue Report.
> Best regards,
>
> Marika
>
> From: Alan Greenberg 
> <<mailto:alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx>alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx>
> Date: Sun, 23 Jan 2011 20:43:01 -0800
> To: PEDNR <<mailto:gnso-pednr-dt@xxxxxxxxx>gnso-pednr-dt@xxxxxxxxx>
> Subject: RE: [gnso-pednr-dt] For review - draft Final Report
>
> And my comments on Oliver's.
>
> Alan
>
> At 22/01/2011 07:16 AM, Oliver Hope wrote:
> > Hi All,
> >
> > I?ve had a look through the document and have 
> > added a few changes/suggestions/questions.
> > Just my thoughts on a few points really so it 
> > will be interesting to see if any of you agree with me or not!
> > Kind regards, and look forward to speaking to you all on Tuesday.
> >
> > Oliver Hope
> > Finance & Operations Director
> > MeshDigital
> > +44(0)1483 304030
> > <mailto:oliver.hope@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>oliver.hope@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> >
> > From: Marika Konings [ mailto:marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx]
> > Sent: 05 January 2011 12:16
> > To: PEDNR
> > Subject: [gnso-pednr-dt] For review - draft Final Report
> >
> > Dear All,
> >
> > As discussed during yesterday's meeting, please 
> > find attached the latest version of the draft 
> > Final Report including line numbers to 
> > facilitate review. You are requested to review 
> > this document and share your comments, 
> > suggestions and/or proposed edits with the 
> > mailing list at the latest by 24 January 2011. 
> > Please note that the recommendations are being 
> > worked on separately from this document and 
> > will be inserted once agreed upon by the Working Group.
> > With best regards,
> >
> > Marika
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