[gnso-pednr-dt] For Final Review - PEDNR Proposed Final Report
Dear All, Please find attached for your review an updated version of the PEDNR Proposed Final Report. * This version of the report incorporates the edits suggested by James, Paul and Alan and removes the background section from the Annex as discussed during yesterday's call. * I've incorporated the recommendations circulated by Alan earlier today, noting that further changes may still be made and will be updated accordingly in the report, but I thought it would be useful to already insert them in the document to provide a complete picture. * As discussed, I've organized the recommendations in such a way that they follow the appropriate charter questions, which has resulted in another renumbering compared to the suggested renumbering by Alan (if you feel that certain recommendations are not listed under the appropriate charter question, please let me know) * Also, in relation to recommendation #15, as listed in Alan's document, as it appears from the rationale that the WG is no longer making a recommendation in relation to this issue, I've incorporated the rationale in the WG deliberation section under the relevant charter question and not included the recommendation language itself. * I've made some small edits, mainly for readability to the proposed rationale for each recommendations as proposed by Alan * I've also attached a clean version of the report for those that prefer to review without all the redlines. * We are still cleaning up the attendance sheet which will be linked in the report and will add any missing data in relation to attendance before the report is finalized. Please submit any comments, suggestions and/or edits to the mailing list as soon as possible, but no later than Friday 18 February (COB – anywhere). Thanks, Marika Attachment:
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