[gnso-policyimpl-dt] RE: For your review - Updated version of Policy & Implementation WG Charter
Thanks Marika for turning this around so quickly. My suggested edits and comments are redlined in the attached version. Chuck From: owner-gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Marika Konings Sent: Tuesday, June 18, 2013 5:54 AM To: gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx Subject: [gnso-policyimpl-dt] For your review - Updated version of Policy & Implementation WG Charter Dear All, As discussed, please find attached an updated version of the draft WG Charter incorporating the edits proposed by Jordyn and Chuck, as well as the additions suggested by Avri. Please note that I made a couple of minor edits to improve the language flow. You'll find attached a redline version, which shows the changes from the original draft to this version, as well as a clean version to facilitate review of additional edits / comments. You are encouraged to share any additional comments / edits you may have with the mailing list ahead of the next meeting (Monday 24 June at 19.00 UTC), preferably in the form of suggested language for inclusion / change in the draft charter by red-lining which will facilitate review. With best regards, Marika Attachment:
Policy Implementation WG - Charter - 18 June 2013 - Clean with Gomes edits.doc
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