Re: [gnso-policyimpl-dt] Updated version of Policy & Implementation WG Charter - Holly's comments

[Jill Titzer <jtitzer@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

+1 to Tim's comment.  But think the revised one from Marika is clearer.

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From: Tim Ruiz <tim@xxxxxxxxxxx<mailto:tim@xxxxxxxxxxx>>
Date: Thursday, June 20, 2013 8:50 AM
To: "Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx<mailto:cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>>
Cc: Mike O'Connor <mike@xxxxxxxxxx<mailto:mike@xxxxxxxxxx>>, 
"gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx>" 
<gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx>>
Subject: Re: [gnso-policyimpl-dt] Updated version of Policy & Implementation WG 
Charter - Holly's comments

I don't care either way as long as an important underlying goal is not lost - 
not allowing the development or modification of policy under the guise of 
"implementation details." That is the primary motivation that got the GNSO 
Council interested in this issue.

Tim


On Jun 20, 2013, at 9:41 AM, "Gomes, Chuck" 
<cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx<mailto:cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>> wrote:

Based on the conversations on the Council and in other settings I think the 
leaning was to say ‘policy and implementation’ because ‘policy v. 
implementation’ implies it is one against the other, a situation that isn’t 
necessarily true.  I support this view.

Chuck

From:owner-gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:owner-gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx>
 [mailto:owner-gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Mike O'Connor
Sent: Thursday, June 20, 2013 9:20 AM
To: gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx>
Subject: Re: [gnso-policyimpl-dt] Updated version of Policy & Implementation WG 
Charter - Holly's comments

hi Marika,

this is really helpful and i support your suggested wording, with one 
incredible nitpick editing suggestion.

i think it would be helpful to replace the slash "/" in your bullet 1 with a 
word.  Avri and i had a riotous off-list conversation as to whether this effort 
is called "policy vs implementation" (my words) or "policy AND implementation" 
(the words that show up everywhere else).

i gently prefer "policy versus implementation" because it implies that this is 
about the exploring how the choice between various courses of action are 
defined and implemented.  "Policy AND implementation" can be interpreted much 
more broadly, which may not be what was intended.  i don't have a strong 
preference here and can happily live with our current wording.  but i think 
"policy / implementation" is ambiguous -- plus i bet that non-native English 
speakers will be confused by that construct.

see?  one character.  this may be a personal-best smallest-nitpick for me.  :-)

thanks,

mikey


On Jun 20, 2013, at 6:10 AM, Marika Konings 
<marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx>> wrote:


Dear All,

Following further conversations with Holly, I would like you to consider the 
following rewording of the mission & scope section to address the points raised 
by Holly in her original email (note that Holly supports these as reworded):

The Policy & Implementation Working Group is tasked to provide the GNSO Council 
with a set of recommendations on:

1.     A set of principles that would underpin any GNSO policy / implementation 
related discussions;
2.     Recommendations on a process for providing GNSO “Policy Guidance”, 
including criteria for when it would be appropriate to use such a process 
instead of a GNSO Policy Development Process;
3.     A framework for implementation related discussions related to GNSO 
Policy Recommendations, including criteria for when something is to be 
considered policy and when it should be considered implementation, and;
4.     Further guidance on how GNSO Implementation Review Teams are expected to 
function and operate.

Please feel free to share any additional comments and/or edits you may have on 
this section or other parts of the draft charter with the mailing list.

With best regards,

Marika

From: Marika Konings <marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx>>
Date: Thursday 20 June 2013 09:28
To: Holly Raiche <h.raiche@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx<mailto:h.raiche@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>>, 
"gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx>" 
<gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx>>
Subject: Re: [gnso-policyimpl-dt] Updated version of Policy & Implementation WG 
Charter - Holly's comments

Holly, just a question of clarification, your proposed edits seem to have 
removed two objectives that were identified by the GNSO Council as needing to 
be included as a minimum, namely:

  *   Recommendations on a process for providing GNSO "Policy Guidance"
  *   A framework for implementation related discussions related to GNSO Policy 
Recommendations
Was that intentionally?

In relation to your proposed addition 'Recommendations on  how to determine 
whe[n] a policy should only be finalised through a PDP process and when it can 
be determined by a less formal process', Annex A of the ICANN Bylaws already 
states that 'If the GNSO is conducting activities that are not intended to 
result in a Consensus Policy, the Council may act through other processes'. The 
main issue (at least from my perspective) is that there currently are no formal 
'other processes' by which such other activities, that are not intended to 
result in consensus policies, can be carried out. The GNSO has used various 
ad-hoc processes in the past (with varying degrees of success), but as these 
processes do not have any formal standing under the current Bylaws or GNSO 
Operating Procedures, there is also no formal requirement for the ICANN Board 
to recognise these recommendations in a similar way as they are required to do 
for PDP recommendations (see section 9 of Annex A). Hence, the importance of 
developing such other processes, such as "GNSO Policy Guidance", to allow for 
other mechanisms to develop GNSO non-consensus policy recommendations.

With best regards,

Marika

From: Holly Raiche <h.raiche@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx<mailto:h.raiche@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>>
Date: Thursday 20 June 2013 01:53
To: "gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx>" 
<gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:gnso-policyimpl-dt@xxxxxxxxx>>
Cc: Marika Konings <marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx>>
Subject: Re: [gnso-policyimpl-dt] Updated version of Policy & Implementation WG 
Charter - Holly's comments

Thanks everyone for the comments, particularly Marika for turning the document 
around so quickly.

As we agreed at the last meeting, what we need to lock in by the next meeting 
is the Mission and Scope.  Once that is done, we can move on to the objectives 
and goals (noting how little time we have for both).

With that in mind, I'd like to clarify the  suggested Mission and Scope 
statement, reflecting where we got to at the last meeting.

And my recollection is that there was still discussion on what is 'policy' - 
not that this DT will define it, but that it is an issues.  Specifically, there 
was discussion arising from the 'Framework" document on policy - anything from 
the more formal 'policy' decisions made through a PDP process to the less 
formal 'policy' as procedure.

AS Chuck has said in his most recent comments, 'all processes, policy and 
implementation and the framework for interaction between the two need to be 
multi-stakeholder.  so our scope is clearly beyond just policy as PDP.

So may I suggest the following as a revised Mission and Scope:

Key Assumptions:
Processes for the development of a formal policy through the PDP process are 
well understood
Processes for determining whether the development of a policy should be 
undertaken through a PDP process or a less formal process are not well 
understood
The process for determining when a policy has been decided and the remaining 
task is to implement the policy is not well defined
All processes, policy and implementation and the framework for interaction 
between the two need to be multi-stakeholder

Mission for the WG:
The Policy & Implementation Working Group is tasked to provide the GNSO Council 
with a recommendations on:
1.     Principles that underpin any GNSO policy / implementation related 
discussions;
2.     Recommendations on  how to determine whe a policy should only be 
finalised through a PDP process and when it can be determined by a less formal 
process;
3.     A framework for determining when an issue is about 'policy' and when the 
issue has progressed to the implementation of policy, and;
4.     Further guidance on how GNSO Implementation Review Teams are expected to 
function and operate.


I realise that the text will take discussion, but my fear is that, unless we 
put the issues into the Mission and Scope section, they will be lost.

Holly







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